Something to Sing About by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 5 Taking Over

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10/28/2006 06:57 am
Now that's very interesting. Is Buffy going to be the mother? Can't wait to find out. Wonderful fic, thanks.

sirc
03/02/2006 12:33 pm
I have some ideas on the baby, but I'll wait for you to give more hints. Great chapter
First hint in next chpt!

Robyn
03/02/2006 12:08 pm
I really like that Buffy is recognizing how she feels, but that the way you have her doing it doesn’t feel forced or out of character. I loved her actions in Willie’s, intimidate then ask the questions, and Spike watching her back and complaining about the wasted beer. You do a great job of using little things that make the characterization feel right for the time frame of the story.
Thanks a million for such a kind review. Nice to know you think I’m getting close to the right characterizations.

Lou
03/02/2006 10:54 am
Let's hope they can keep the feelings this time!

03/02/2006 04:22 am
This universe has gotten pretty yucky. Finding a baby and getting said baby away from a hell god seems to be the thing to do now. More story please.

vladt
03/02/2006 02:49 am
very good read. thanks
Thank you for reading.