The Garden of Good and Evil by Persephone
Chapter: Disharmony

04/28/2006 10:44 pm
Poor Tessa - I keep going from hating her to feeling sorry for her - but she does deserve to die ...

03/09/2006 12:59 pm
Ewww... Sickos!  You are doing a wonderful job of making the rest of Spike's family truly hateable!  Will be back to see what happens next!
Thank you! The other three are awful vampires, and it's been interesting to see how twisted I can make them. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

SpaceLord
03/09/2006 12:53 pm
Hmm I would have hoped for a bit of torture of Harmony. I don't think that Spike would settle for just dusting her, I'm thinking that there would be hours upon hours of pain before she dusted.
Spike still has to go check in on Buffy before the sun rises, although torturing Harmony wouldn't have been bad to see. But why prolong the inevitable? She had it coming, and now it's time for more angst and even some sweetness.

03/09/2006 07:13 am
GRRRR ARGH!! Will Spike ever figure out this puzzle? He should find Angelus, tie him up and give him to Tessa. Why does Tessa think everything is Spike's fault?
Spike will figure things out sooner rather than later, I promise. You'll have to wait and see what becomes of Angel, too. Spike let Tessa be hurt and taken away, along with the fact he was the one who sired her, so she has a lot of residual anger. Don't worry, though- everyone else will get what's coming to them, too.

03/09/2006 04:45 am
What the HELL??!!
Is that a good response or a bad response?

03/09/2006 04:45 am
What the HELL??!!

03/09/2006 04:45 am
What the HELL??!!

vladt
03/09/2006 04:28 am
angelus does all the harm and spike gets the hatred? tessa could be a scoobie the way her mind works. very good read. enjoying the story. thanks
You're very right about Tessa being very similar to the Scoobies in the way she thinks. Angelus is hated, too, but that portion of the story won't be coming for a bit. I hope you continue to like the story!

03/09/2006 03:55 am
omg!!! how awful, they're taking her away somewhere? um, no wonder the girl's bitter...i'm scared for spike...i wonder how Buffy's gonna take this...not well, obviously...i hope she believes him that he didn't do it...and he just killed the only one who could have given him a lead on what he's dealing with...*sigh*...this story still fascinates me, can't wait for the next update!!
Yes, Angelus and Darla are taking her away, and William has no idea. You'll have to wait and see how Buffy reacts and how she'll treat Spike. Like you said, Spike dusted the only person/creature who could help him a little to figure out what's going on, which was a bad call. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!