Paper Promise by Jess Marie
Chapter: Common People

02/26/2010 11:07 pm
Oh, no!  A Greek mythological reference involved in demonology?! Back to Spuffyness...really love the last paragraph.  What a warm feeling indeed!

02/01/2010 04:38 am
What a lovely last line!  You write so well.  For example this is a remarkable transition between scenes:  (you wrote)
And it seems muscle’s the only thing I’m good for anymore.”
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“Tell me again, exactly, what either of you two idiots is good for?” Warren Meers paced

While I am really, really enjoying the story, I am also enjoying your lovely writing style, too!

Spikesdeb
01/19/2010 02:51 am
Awwww, Buffy!  Just LISTEN to him, will you!  Hear the tone of his voice.  Poor things - time never seems right for them to be on the same page.  Hurrying on!

Klingon!

12/30/2009 11:29 pm
Great Trio scene and look Buffy is starting to soften up.  :)

Robyn
04/18/2006 09:49 am
If only Buffy could learn to think before she spoke perhaps she would be less likely to hurt those around her, and just maybe she would be able to communicate what she is really feeling. I love that she admitted that Spike brings kindness to her life and helps her keep going.

03/14/2006 06:41 pm
Wonderful chap! I can't wait to see what you do next.

03/14/2006 05:04 pm
Isn't it time to kill Warren and run the other two idiots out of town?

03/14/2006 05:03 pm
I'm almost feeling sorry for Warren here. He's surrounded by morons. Cruel Buffy. She needs a spanking.

03/14/2006 04:37 pm
great update! ugh! buffy stupid mouth outrunning her brain again!

03/14/2006 12:30 pm
aww... :)

03/14/2006 06:45 am
Oh yeah damn good ficcie, is Buffu actctualy waking up???

03/14/2006 06:43 am
she's getting so close.....

03/14/2006 06:39 am
Aww. Poor Spike. All he's doing is trying and Buffy has to keep kicking him. Hope she learns something soon. Great chapter!

03/14/2006 05:24 am
nice insight there, buffy...too bad you didn't think of it *before* you hurt him *again*... *sigh*...wonderful story...buffy makes me mad though...poor spike... :(