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Menehune and Night Marchers by gotkona :-) 05/18/2010 02:32 pm 01/28/2008 09:15 pm yep i was right this chapter was better then the 1st one ~*~Tasha~*~ 05/23/2006 08:10 am Awesome chapter. You really have Spike down pat with this. His playful snarky attitude that we loved so much. Nice way for Buffy too. I like this Buffy much better than the bitchy Buffy that we've been getting in so many stories lately. It's nice to get a respite from that. I like nice Buffy too though most of the time she was bitchy Buffy. 05/10/2006 12:29 am very interesting way to bring him back - i wonder what Buffy will do with him.... Do you really wonder?;) 04/28/2006 05:36 am ooooo yummy! spike... gah Robyn 04/28/2006 02:38 am This chapter was very nice, I loved that you had Buffy confused and off balance but as soon as it really hit her that Spike was back she jumped into his arms and kissed him. It was a move that I could really see her making. Thank you for the nice review. tina 04/28/2006 12:30 am This is nicely written but the plot seems a bit too rushed. The idea behind it is amazing, the wishing thing, but maybe... giving spike and buffy a little time to get to know each other again before they throw themselves at each other? You don't need to cheapen this intricate plot by obligatory smut, right off the bat. I usually do not review but I felt like I should say something here. I mean no disrespect, btw and I hope it's not taken that way. No disrespect taken and btw this is my first attempt at writing so timing isn't a strong point with me yet. It's a rather short fic too so things do move a bit fast here. | |||
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