On My Mind by kittiekat
Chapter: Lightly She Steps

01/28/2014 10:16 am
Wonderful story - like how you worked with all the characters and connected your original character to the Glory arc.  I particularly liked the Spike/William dreamscapes.

Thanks. :-)
05/28/2010 08:03 am
 

12/20/2007 02:34 am
OH is it over, its seems like a strange place to leave it.

12/06/2006 11:11 pm
wow...just...wow *absoulutly shocked* i knew this story'd be good when i read the summerary but at the end (iam asuming it's the end) its really really good hence the 'absoulutly shocked' it was pretty cool .... *claps* well done!!!

10/04/2006 06:37 am
that was terribly sad....very poor judgment on buffy's part...looking forward to your next installment, love :)

05/14/2006 03:20 pm
sweet ending

jodi
05/07/2006 04:00 pm
Love the story. Read it in one sitting. Decided to keep it on hard drive for future enjoyment. Hope you don't mind. Looking forward to sequel. Again well done:)

05/03/2006 08:07 pm
I started reading this yesterday. Great fic! I enjoyed every word.
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it, truly I am! I send you many many happy thoughts and a snoopy dance of your very own! ;)

astrodex
05/03/2006 04:45 pm
This is the first of your stories that I have read. You have wonderfully emotional style. Your descriptions are very evocative. I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your writings.
Thank you so much! That's so wonderful to read, I can't even tell you! I'm very happy you liked it and truly hope I won't disappoint in the future! *shiver* ;) Thanks again!

vladt
05/02/2006 10:29 pm
very good read. i believe spike. thanks for the fun read.
Hehe. I'm glad you believe him. ;) Very happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for all the leaving of your mark! :)

pretty_in_fangs
05/02/2006 05:08 pm
Yay. Wonderful. And I can't wait for a sequel.
So grand you thought so! Very happy! And it is on top of my list! The sequel is, I mean. ;) Thank you!

05/02/2006 04:54 pm
Here I am doing the song of SEQUEL!! This was amazing, first to last chapter. Thank you so much for bringing it to us!!
Haha, thanks girl, I appreciate it and hey, I didn't know you could sing so beautifully. Very cool. Thank you so much for HAVING me, are you kidding?! This site truly is awesome. I lurve it in its whole and Spuffiness. Am-a-zing. Thanks ever so much!!!

05/02/2006 04:33 pm
Hey! Just read this story in its entirety and I have to say that I really enjoyed it. I love the use of the subconscious to show Spike and Buffy how the other really is/feels. Very clever. And I liked this last chapter, too, because instead of just immediately falling in love with him, but there's a chance that she might. Very nice. I'll be looking out for that sequel, as well! :)
Oooh, I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! And luverly that you read the whole thing, always a good sign. :) Oooh, so glad you enjoyed the ending which was kinduv a start as well! So nice about the looking for the sequel. I am in the throws of making love to my computer. Eh. Ew. Something like it. ;) Thanks a million!

Lou
05/02/2006 01:26 pm
I completely enjoyed this in all its surrealism, though a bigger crumb would have been nice. Many thanks.
Aw, I am sorry, Lou, about the crumb and it being small, truly! I didn't mean for it to be! It just - as I've said before, though not to you - didn't fit to throw them together at the end. But I AM working on a sequel! I'm happy you enjoyed the fic, though! :) And thanks for reviewing!

Robyn
05/02/2006 01:02 pm
I loved that she was truthful with him and that she gave him a clean slate. She is right, for her it is too soon for her to love him, but her actions showed that she does care, and by giving him a clean slate and a chance to fight along side her she is giving him hope. I loved how as she was leaving after telling him that she doesn’t love him, he promised her that she will and she didn’t deny it or fight it. By going into his mind and allowing him into hers she really got to know him, and instead of denying to herself what she learned, she followed the best example she could, her mothers, and gave him a second chance. I really loved this fic and am glad that you decided to post here. I will be looking forward to the sequel.
I'm so glad the ending agreed with you. I honestly didn't mean for it to be left hanging when I began the fic, but then when I'd finished it, it just didn't fit to put them together just like that. Neways. I'm so so SO glad you're glad I decided to post on this site because I think it's fabulous here and plan to stick around for a while. :) Thanks so much, I'll try my best at the making of the sequel! *hugs*

05/02/2006 12:47 pm
damn good chappie :P
Very glad for that sentiment! Thanks a lot!