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Truth and Lies by Celest
Chapter: Chapter Two
03/13/2007 12:35 pm
Now I'm getting it. Angelus has his soul and somehow fathered a child that William will marry one day. His soul won't let him act like the demon he is. So that's why he cares about her and trying to keep the Council from finding out about her. Can't wait for Dru to find William. Very good fic, thanks.
Angelus does not have a soul, he's all demon. His demon sees his daughter as a favored Childe, or even a Mate without the ick. He's extremely proud of her existence, and very protective of her. A soul doesn't make a person feel love. That's up to the individual. Angelus is possessive and protexctive of Lizzie and Dru, because they are his family. Eventually, as he gets to know his daughter, he'll love her for her, rather than just as an extension of himself. Just like any parent would feel with a new child. Hope this helps!
sirc
05/04/2006 05:32 pm
great chapter
vladt
05/04/2006 01:48 am
excellent read, and that was difficult to write because i so hate angel/angelus. love the tale, more please. thanks for the read.
So do I normally! He gets a bit. . . pompous, the way he treats everyone around him, and he's not exactly the sharpest crayon in the box. Yeah, bring hell unto Earth, really smart, exactly. . . what was he going to eat? And aren't really susceptible to fire (if they were going with fire and brimstone)? That always bugged me.
05/03/2006 04:41 pm
Interesting that Angelus managed to impregnate this girl (Dru?). How will Spike come into the family and how will they get even with the Wankers' Council? More story please.
I actually just updated. And yeah, it's Dru. Don't worry, you'll find out!
05/03/2006 03:24 pm
So far i am loving the direction of the story. At the moment i don't think lack of dialog is holding it back at all. Can't wait for more.
Thanks, I've tried to write more dialogue, but always scrap it. It just doesn't fit with what I'm trying to write, so, lots of thinking's going on. Eh. I'm glad it's not affecting the story, thank you so much for taking the time to review! And I should have the next chap up w/i the next two hours.
05/03/2006 02:34 pm
very very good so far...can't wait for more...you portray angelus well, evil and scary but still with emotions...good job :)
Wow. . . thank you so, so much. He's difficult to write, as he's pretty dark. I was worried that I needed to have Dru chained to the bed or something, was worried he was too fluffy. Beware: he hets a bit bunny-like in the next chap, Anya'd hate him!
Robyn
05/03/2006 09:33 am
Thanks for the update I am still really enjoying this fic. And as for Angelus you are doing a good job with him.
Thanks for taking the time to review! I'm glad that he doesn't seem forced, he's the one tugging the most against where I'm going. =)
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