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Truth and Lies by Celest
Chapter: Chapter Five
07/28/2006 01:02 am
wow...how awful...poor little baby...he was defending her, this time...though that doesn't make up for all the other atrocities he'd committed...great chapter :)
sirc
05/17/2006 04:49 pm
well done.
vladt
05/08/2006 08:42 pm
yes! yes, i read every lovely word. yes, i enjoy the way you are moving the story along. yes, i like the mini chapters. yes, i would enjoy longer chapter. yes, just yes! thanks for the fine read.
I'm glad you like it, thank you so much for responding to my little inquiry!
Robyn
05/08/2006 01:16 pm
Even mini chapters are good. :D I like the progression you make in each chapter with their little girl as she ages and learns more about her parents. I am really enjoying the story, and yes I read the introductory part, I read everything you put on the page. :)
Thank you! I know they seem a little random, but they help start the chapter off, I needed something to introduce the next little snapshot of their lives together, so it works.
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