Leave Your Lights On by Niamh
Chapter: Theirs

nmcil
08/19/2007 04:29 pm
Glad you decided to add to your original story concept - Part 1 and Part 2 would also have been great alone - but the Spuffy in me likes this addition.

~*~Tasha~*~
07/17/2006 06:44 am
Beautiful!! Absolutely beautiful!! That was an awesome ending to this chapter. Each chapter is an ending in itself ... then you give us a wonderful bit of more. Thank you so much

06/15/2006 01:30 pm
very good chapter - really intense emotions - i am enjoying this very much!

VWalk
06/15/2006 04:34 am
You've honestly moved me to tears. Is this an incredibly moving story - or am i just an emotional sap?

To clarify I'm going with the first choice.

I love the way you revealed that it was her blood he was drinking. As she kept defrosting I was thinking 'why doesn't she just let him drink from her?' Should have known you'd be way ahead of me.

The gesture of her stockpiling her own blood in the chance that he'll come back is tremendous.

I love this story.

Lou
06/07/2006 11:37 pm
Tears all round. Thank you for that - just beautiful.

vladt
06/04/2006 05:17 am
this was an excellent two chapter work. i have no idea how to express how beautiful the third update makes the tale. thank you for the wonderful read.

06/02/2006 07:45 pm
Perfect, and you even used one of my favorite songs by Loreena McKennitt to set the mood! Lovely achingly visual set of chapters equaling one fine piece of writing.

Kathleen

06/02/2006 08:58 am
Wonderful! Perfect!

06/02/2006 05:54 am
*sigh* this was wonderful. you're such an awesome writer Nia :D

06/02/2006 04:57 am
i'm really glad you decided to write anoter chapter. great work.

06/02/2006 04:49 am
Thank you.

06/02/2006 04:49 am
Thank you.

Robyn
06/02/2006 04:30 am
The emotions in this chapter are so strong. You did such a wonderful job of showing how encompassing Buffy’s grief was and then her fear that Spike wasn’t really there. I like the way she showed that she had held out hope for his return with the blood and then how she expressed her feelings, letting him know that she really loved him. Thank you for another beautifully written chapter, I am really really glad that you decided to do more then just two.

kim
06/02/2006 04:08 am
Awwwwww.....loved it! He'll heal up pretty well with the Slayer blood. Thanks, Illyria....wonder what dimension he ended up in? Fighting and starving....poor baby.

06/02/2006 03:57 am
well I for one am glad to get this chapter. I just love how she was looking for him and hwas always looking for a way back. great insight.