Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Reveal not every secret

nmcil
08/13/2007 04:43 pm
Great story development and connection - excited to have all this new material - last I read the story was just after Willow vanished -

11/24/2006 05:15 pm
hmmm....this gets more interesting all the time...seems they're going to have a bit more in the way of allies than they had thought, though...tha's good...good chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:48 am
Oh my what a lovely twist - Bryn lived to be alnost 200 - wow just amzing! I love this story! It is absoltly fab - great twists and can't wait to read the rest!

~*~Tasha~*~
07/18/2006 02:33 am
Catching up on my BSV fics that I read. I am VERY HAPPY to see several updates of this one in the time that I was gone. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

I really like the chemistry between Jenner and Faith. His information about Bryn is awesome too. I love how you weave your story's plots.

Verda
07/03/2006 06:11 am
So Bryn lived almost 150 years after her resurrection before being killed? Cool. Happy that Dawn had Tara since her parents couldn't be there. Now to see what Jenner's going to do? Another great chapter.

Samara
06/19/2006 04:44 pm
I am so glad you are continuing this story! I love all your work and I can't wait to see where this goes!

Esther
06/19/2006 06:45 am
SQUEE!!! Great chapter!! I love the details you've given with each character, especially the connection between Jenner and Faith. Oooh, and then ending it with the intro to a re-born potential. I can't wait for more!!! Take care!!

Lizzziegrl
06/15/2006 12:16 am
OK, you got me good with this story -- the whole thing, not just this chapter.

I mean, I'm not a Spuffy fan for the most part, but you make the relationship work and work well. The only complaint I have is that Xander seems a bit more stupid and opionionated than in canon. A couple of times you seemed almost ready to make him recognize that life wasn't black and white, but you haven't done it yet.

I love the original characters you've created and how well they blend into your version of this 'verse.

I hope you write more soon, because you've got me addicted!

Thanks!

sirc
06/14/2006 07:50 pm
great chapter

vladt
06/13/2006 05:38 am
wonderful update, as always. thanks for the great read.

Kristen
06/11/2006 02:48 am
As always, I loved the chapter! The meeting seemed pretty slow but I love your writing so much I dont really mind. Update soon!

Emily
06/09/2006 12:41 am
Normally, I would write more, but now all I have to say is WOW!

Cant wait for more!

06/08/2006 09:48 pm
Ooh, Cool!  Great update!

ariadne
06/08/2006 06:55 pm
didn't think of agelus' minions. boy its gonna be tough. good thoughts they both had tog et rid of the threat.
LOL loved the "they won't bite" hhhmmm...something different about LAwson. can't wait to see how that convo goes. :)
Faith was sooooo funny. shes got it back for the vamp. tho cna't blame her he is HOT!!! Jenner is one of the best characters that i have seen in fanfic. i can't wait for you to reveal more about him and his minions. you make the most interesting characters Nia.
i'm glad to see that dawn has someone to talk to. i knew tara would be it but i'm glad that dawn opened up. can't keep it all inside.
i would have loved to ahve been a fly on the table for that meeting. loved the laughing to clear the tension and the way faith and jenner are drawn to each other.
more info on the slayer/vamp mates. least they know they lived for a long time. i was worried about what was gonna happen for a while. i still am but hope they will be ok and the counsil doesn't decide to do something. altho if they did buffy and spike can soooo kick their butts. it was interesting what jenner said about them tho...."they were a sight to behold." i bet they were. thank-you so much for posting. i love tis story so much. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

06/08/2006 06:21 pm
Thank you for the wonderful chapter Niamh! :-)

Judy
06/08/2006 12:41 pm
As always, fantastic chapter.

06/08/2006 11:32 am
Wonderful update, sweets! I'm loving the tension between Jenner and Faith. And Spike and Buffy are so sweet, as always. Thank you.

Emilee
06/08/2006 06:28 am
Excellent as always. Eagerly awaiting more. I love the additions of Lawson and Jenner. It's nice to see someone take the idea that Spike may not be the only vamp capable of more than just being a vamp. If that wasn't too vague.

DizzyB
06/08/2006 05:03 am
So excited to see this update, and it was well worth waiting for! Love how you're weaving this tale together. Awesome.

patricia
06/08/2006 04:31 am
Thank you. beautiful chapter.

06/08/2006 04:30 am
Thanks so much for the wonderful new chapter. I love your additions to the Slayer/vampire mythos. They're well thought out and quite logical - makes for interesting reading. I gotta say that I find it very intriguing that you've got Dawn being Spike and Buffy's biological child. In light of what we learned about the key from the series, it makes quite a bit of sense (not to mention a wonderful plot point). You're such a talented writer. I can't wait to see where this story is going to go next. More, p-l-e-a-s-e. :)

fanxstitch
06/08/2006 02:58 am
Great to see another wonderful chapter of this series. Hope the next will be sooner.

SpaceLord
06/08/2006 01:46 am
Glad to see an update to this story. Gotta love it that's for sure.

06/08/2006 01:46 am
Yeah... More back story and you have Jenner with the info. Love the attraction btwn Faith and Jenner. And what is up with Lawson?? I am glad that now Dawn is open to talking to someone. I hope they can all come to some middle ground here. Great update and I just absolutely love this story. I just wanted you to know.

06/08/2006 01:03 am
The plot thickens....Great update, Nia. It's nice to know you're writing again and feeling better.

pretty_in_fangs
06/08/2006 12:59 am
Sweet. That should be all sorts of fun.

I'm sorry that you're having such trouble with this story. All I can say is that that trouble isn't visible in the story itself. It still flows beautifully.

nickycole
06/08/2006 12:48 am
I love this story. You're a phenomenal writer.

06/08/2006 12:41 am
Oh yeah I loved this chappie :D

Bigbird
06/08/2006 12:38 am
So glad you're continuing this I really like it

Pin
06/08/2006 12:31 am
Very interesting! I can't wait to see where this new line of action takes us. THanks!

06/07/2006 11:19 pm
great chapter.well worth the wait

Badia
06/07/2006 11:17 pm
So glad to see another update. I really love this story.

06/07/2006 10:39 pm
Wow. That was Wow. I sure hope the groove is back cuz I need more. LOL