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Trusting You by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Well, Do You?
08/11/2006 08:01 pm
lovely chapter - intersting that they are both turned on by this - I wonder what is going to happen next - very yummy chapter
yeah, it should get hot :)
06/22/2006 09:01 pm
Sometimes I feel Spike's just too good for Buffy.
i agree...most of the time,actually :)
Verda
06/15/2006 02:25 am
Gosh, sometimes I forget how really badly she did treat him and how much it out of him. I think it would be fun to have him walk into a headstone,not to get hurt of course, but fun all the same. Oops! sorry, must put my horns back in again!*giggles evilly*
lol...you *are* evil...
Emily
06/10/2006 03:59 am
This looks awesome. I just hope that Buffy won't do something incredible cruel to screw up this trust. Yet she will. Cuz shes Buffy. Anywayz, great leading chappie, and I cannot wait to see where it leads to.
well, buffy is buffy...and she's gonna do some not nice things, but in the end she'll learn her lesson :)
Typerbabe57
06/10/2006 03:39 am
Ohhh, I like this game! Looks like it's about to get really interesting, too.
lol...it sure is :)
06/10/2006 02:36 am
It was a good chapter if I don't count the part that I cried a bit. No offense but why do you always have to make people nearly hate the Buffy in your fics? I mean, I'm sure everything's gonna be allright a few chapters later and you just do it to make a point about their relationship. When you started this fic, I thought, just a plot jl can manage. I love your writing style but.. I end up being very upset. I think angst isn't this. Isn't it mary-sueing a character and being unfair to the other? I know that you don't approve her behaviors too, please don't tend to get upset, I'd never like breaking your heart. I think you're a very good writer but when it comes to Buffy, sometimes there's something questionable.
i'm glad that the chapter touched you...i'm sorry if you felt like it made you hate buffy, though...that's so not what i'm going for here..this fic is actually going to attempt to portray her issues from season six, but be sympathetic to her pain, and i don't really see where in these chapters so far i've made her any worse at all than she was in season six :-\
just for the record, the only spuffy fic i've written where buffy is bad is BB, which is currently in progress...if i've portrayed buffy as bad in any other fics on this site, i haven't meant to...
anyways, i hope you enjoy the story, and you haven't offended me..everyone's entitled to their own opinion :)
just for the record, the only spuffy fic i've written where buffy is bad is BB, which is currently in progress...if i've portrayed buffy as bad in any other fics on this site, i haven't meant to...
anyways, i hope you enjoy the story, and you haven't offended me..everyone's entitled to their own opinion :)
06/09/2006 09:27 pm
Give this girl a whip. You are seriously disturbed JL. You known that don't you.
lol...*innocent wide eyes*...what...me? ;)
06/09/2006 03:19 pm
I can't wait for more of this. Reminds me of trust walks they do in camp and on retreats, but maybe more sexual ;)
very astute assessment :)
Tonia (LadyYashka)
06/09/2006 01:33 pm
I really like this story so far. In fact, I really like all of your stories. I look forward to each update.
thanx, so glad you like my work :)
06/09/2006 08:30 am
i woulda made him get naked first... that would be a real test of trust... lol... hoping she wasn't leading him into a public place, heehee
lol, yes but you are one sick puppy, whereas buffy is goodness and light and perfectly well-adjusted...at least in comparison to you, love :P lol j/k *hugs*
Robyn
06/09/2006 08:14 am
This game of trust that they are playing is going to be interesting. I am looking forward to where you take it. Thanks for the update.
thanx, glad you think so :)
Emilee
06/09/2006 07:41 am
She's gonna hurt him, isn't she? You're stories always make me cry for Spike. Otherwise, good chapter. Definately want to see where it goes from here.
actually in this story...not so much :) this is more an exploration of the issues of their relationship in season six, but buffy is portrayed (i feel) more sympathetically in this fic...she's hurting and she's going to push the envelope..but she's not going to *really* hurt him, i promise :)
golddrake
06/09/2006 07:12 am
I'm really enjoying this story.
thanx, glad you are :)
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