great chapter

Whatever is controlling Buffy is so frightening and unfeeling in any good way. And wonderful, poor, brave Spike, it is really too bad that the Scoobies can't see what Joyce and Dawn see, his true character.

Please god that's the end of the gruesome torture!

Ugh!  Never get out of the car! Eeek!

Ugh!  Never get out of the car! Eeek!

Edge of my seat here!!!! Thanks!

oh no. Please let Dawn be safe.

I just hope Dawn can pull Buffy back. And I am hoping that Spike was able to get through to her on some level. What is it that Buffy's slayer nature knows that she was not really sharing about Dawn. Come on back Buffy.

ahhhhh.........

Intensely creepy and scary - Great Chapter! Fascinated to see what happens next.

Oh not good. So when is the cavalry gonna get there? And GOD she's being nasty in this. Well written. Can't wait for the next update.

That got me in the pit of my stomach and to end it right there, you are *evil*! but I love it. Update soon!

Muahahahahahaha, bye bye dawnie!!

OMG!!Unless Buffy gets back in control, I can't imagine how anyone can stop her. This chapter gave me goosebumps!

frightening read, thanks

God she's scary!

Okay...much as I HATE this idea, in fact I can't believe I'm even posing it- maybe the way to get through to "good" Buffy is to lay it all on the line for Dawn. "Bad" Buffy thinks Spike is hers, but doesn't really want to see him hurt. So it follows that- if Spike were to put himself in, pardon the pun, "mortal" danger- perhaps "bad" Buffy would be gone for good? Here's hopin'! *crosses fingers*

Wow! It doesn't get any creepier than this. Hope the part of Dawn that is the key can find a way to come to the rescue. Think it's all up to Dawn. Even if the scoobies show up, at this point I don't think there's much they can do. Might make the situation that much worse. Of course, it wouldn't hurt for them to actually witness psycho, possessed Buffy in action. Another cliffhanger. I think you're just cruel even if I am loving this. Looking forward to the next installment.

Scary. Very very scary. (so of course, very effective writing, and clear portrayal... so very very scary.)

Yep,I agree it's good and scary all right.

i wonder what is going to happen next

Youa re so EVIL! I can't believe you left it there!! You know, I can just picture you sitting there, writing these chapters, and giggling like a maniac when you know that ending with the cliffies you do , is going to throw all of us readers into a tizzy!! But thats ok, I still love reading your stories!!

Oh dear. Oh dear oh dear oh dear.

I can't imagine what will happen next. I am really tired of cruel Buffy. When will she get her comeuppance. Great chapter.

Oooo, that's a creepy chapter, JL.

great chapter.