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The Kindred Series - Book Two by DizzyB
Chapter: Ch 7 - The Darkness Within
vladt
06/28/2006 09:07 am
excellent chapter. you have accomplished the impossible. you have forced me to actually like (maybe tolerate is a better word) xander. thanks for the great read.
Thanks for the great review. It's not easy to change an opinion of someone, so this is a huge compliment! Thank you! More soon. :)
Carol
06/28/2006 03:55 am
I love this friendship with Xander and William. I've always liked Xander.
One of the few things I hated about the show was how they only allowed select new friends into the inner circle. How long did it take Tara to get accepted? And Anya & Spike were always on the fringes. So, I'm having fun with new friendships and relationships. Glad you're enjoying the ride. More soon. :)
06/28/2006 01:08 am
Excellent chapter. I love the way Xander is changing and becoming a better person. Look forward to seeing Angel's punishment.
Thank you, thank you! More soon. :)
06/28/2006 12:33 am
Seeeee now I am carving a new stake with Angel's name on it. A Pine stake cause they splinter and break and should cause him more pain :P
Makes you want to stake him, doesn't it? But then again, Tessa did tell Spike that they needed to see the ugliness and the beauty inside of each other. Hmmm. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Kawaki
06/27/2006 09:16 pm
I understand Zander wanting to protect Will's privacy, but for all they know it was Angelus who raped him. And they have no idea if Angel actually left town. By not saying anything he's left everyone vulnerable to an out of control Angel or Angelus.
Valid point and an oversight on my part that will be addressed in the next chapter. Thanks for the input, which I always find valuable. Appreciate you taking the time to comment. :)
06/27/2006 09:05 pm
what an excelletn chapter...i would have loved to see xander adn spike actually be friends, if xander could have ever been open to the possibility....and i'm like, 'go xander, stake angel now!'....i can't stand angel, i hate him, how awful for poor spike/william...an excellent update, and i cant wait for more :)
Wasn't it odd that the male characters in the group never really became friends although the females were BFF? I never really understood the logic there. The closest they came was a lame attempt with Riley and Xander being semi-friends and that was laughable at best. Glad you liked the update. My life is getting back to normal...my house will be done this weekend. So, back to regular updates shortly. :)
SpaceLord
06/27/2006 08:03 pm
Hope you get the next update out sooner....had to re-read the previous chapter to remind myself of what had happened.
I think this story is great by the way.
I think this story is great by the way.
Sorry about that delay between posting. I'm working on the next chapter now, and my house should be completely finished by this weekend. So, I'll be back to regular updates shortly. :P
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