Telly Time by deedo
Chapter: Telly Time

Brit Girl
05/07/2012 01:18 am
Being British myself can I just say that I am bloody impressed with the terminology and knowledge of my culture! This has some of the best and funniest Spike dialogue I've read so far. He is like a typical bloke and it puts things into perspective of what he could be like which you would never contemplate! Most guys are just obsessed with football over here and shout at the telly and can't concentrate on anything else! I particularly loved him saying what I think which is that they get paid way too much for what they do and classic lines about David Beckham!

Thank you for making me laugh out loud. As you seem to know your football are you male or indeed even a very clever female? I don't understand the first thing about the game myself! 

01/02/2012 12:15 pm
LOL, I love it. Any season 6 story that takes Buffy down a notch is great in my opinion. Okay I know she was dealing with something that would have most of us hiding in our beds crying constantly. But the way she used him, and just assumed that no matter what she would always come first for him even though she barely gave him a thought bugged me. She turned him into a SpikeBot that year so this is great.

:-)
06/27/2010 07:41 pm
 

04/11/2009 10:18 pm
Hilarious!   I would think Buffy was totally self absorbed until she showed how badly she needed time with Spike.  

02/16/2008 02:52 pm
Oh I loved it.

02/15/2008 02:58 am
Come by in... about an hour. 'm busy."

Howling with laughter D

11/13/2006 01:41 am
Come by in... about an hour. 'm busy. - ROFLMAO - she should have staked him just for that!
yeah and if she hadn't be so surprised she probably would have done it :D
Thanks for the review!

Lou
09/16/2006 08:49 pm
Funny! World Cup fever was not what she was expecting!
Nope, not even Spike can be cured of that! :)
Thank you for reviewing!

jeanie
09/16/2006 04:09 pm
well you just proved that spike is justlike every other male the world over(football watching, beer guzzling, neanderthals)and buffy is a football widow.
No male can resist fotball and beer, not even Spike *snorts*
Poor Buffy, but he'll make it up to her, no worries. :D
Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!! :)

tg1982
08/14/2006 08:06 pm
nice fic. I stand by the football
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!! I haven't heard from you or tisca in a while. I hope you're both okay! *hugs*

tg1982
08/14/2006 08:05 pm
I think Buffy might be channelling Tisca's spirit
You think?? Is that a good or a bad thing?? :)

07/28/2006 05:48 pm
cute
Thank you!

~*~Tasha~*~
07/22/2006 08:38 pm
ROFL!!!!! That was funny!
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Robyn
07/19/2006 05:00 pm
I love how funny, cute, and real this is. An additional chapter or two would definitely be nice.
Thank you!
I didn't have that much time over the last couple of weeks, but I'm working on it. :)

Verda
07/17/2006 08:21 pm
That was great! Loved the remark about Beckham and Posh. Absolutely hysterical to think that he'd ignore a naked, horny Buffy. Definately chapter two of smutty goodness. I'm American, and I'd hear of "ponying up" before, as in paying off a bet. Looking forward to chapter 2. Thanks for the read.
I'm working on it and I'm glad to hear you had a good time reading.
Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

07/16/2006 02:31 am
A very well written fic. I truly enjoyed it, but it really needs a bit of beta tweaking.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I work on improving my writing, but do you mean beta tweaking in reference to the spelling, puntuation, etc. or the story/plot itself?

07/14/2006 10:44 am
Yay!  That was fantastic!  Definitely needs another chapter!
Thank you very much!
I'm currently working on the continuation. :)

07/14/2006 09:08 am
Has mizz elainias actually watched series six of Buffy! There was no more smut in this fic than there was shown on tv and childern young than spike'smrs class watched that!!
I don't think there was any real smut in this fic so far...
thank you for the support! :)

mizz elainias
07/14/2006 06:40 am
To quote Spike...Is everyone here very stoned? Sure, it's a very cute idea, but I couldn't even finish it because the punctuation (what little there is of it) is so very, VERY bad! I honestly can't believe that this fic was beta'd at all.

Also, as I skimmed the reviews prior to attempting to read the fic itself, I noticed that spikesmrs class read the fic and was kind enough to leave a review. Quite frankly, I'm appalled that her students are even aware of this site and that they can view it from school, much less reading a fic about a horny Buffy stripping down and expecting Spike to jump up and service her. Even if they are 17, as the NC-17 warning states, they're still in school.

Sorry, but I won't be one that is begging for a smutty second chapter unless you get a beta that knows what they are doing.
I'm sorry to hear, that the lack of correct punctuation kept you from finishing to read the fic. But I'll try to keep that in mind, and work on it, for future fics.
As for spike'smrs letting her class read it, that's really something out of my reach.

Nevertheless, thank you for reviewing, hopefully it'll help to improve my writing.
I hope the second chapter, I'm currently working on, will be up to your standards, should you decide to give it a chance.

Joan
07/14/2006 04:06 am
Didn't understand a word of the soccer parts, but laughed out loud at the rest. Definitely more, please.
Thank you, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. :)

Emilee
07/13/2006 07:43 pm
Yeah, there should be a smutty chapter 2. That was great. I can imagine Buffy's shock at suddenly not finding herself at the center of Spike's world. But, alas, stlil in denial. Definately interested in more, and if not, this was still fun!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to review.

07/13/2006 07:34 pm
Oh, too priceless for words. Spike Not exactly turning her down, but some how managing to do it anyway. Loved this.
Yeah, football can do that to men... :)
Thanks for reviewing.

07/13/2006 05:20 pm
Lovely story, great timing. Spike's rant at Becks was hilarious. I would love a smutty chapter 2...Footie, Spike and Smut....makes me all tingly. Thanks for story.
I aim to please!:)
Thank you for the review!

07/13/2006 04:55 pm
LOL That was so much fun! It had crossed my mind to write a short fic about Spike watching the England vs Portugal game, but I don't think it would have been nearly as good as this. My favorite part was when he was yelling at Beckham and asking if Posh had screwed the last of his brains out lol Hilarious.
Glad you liked! :)
Thanks for reviewing!

spikes_wish
07/13/2006 02:55 pm
chapter 2 please! But the 'pony' thing? I'm english nd I've neva heard that b4? Where about in England do they use it?
spike'smrs told me about that one when I asked about another more british word for money, but I also read it in an article here -> http://www.worldwidewords.org/articles/money.htm
Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

araedhel
07/13/2006 02:49 pm
chapter 2 please.
I'm working on it :)

Lou
07/13/2006 02:41 pm
Wait till they get to the penalties!
uh oh, that's gonna be intense :D
Thanks for the review!

sour
07/13/2006 01:21 pm
well it's world cup! You cannot miss! No amount of sex is worth it!
Do we want a 2nd chapter?definitely yes!
that's right, saw every game! :)
I'm working on the continuation.
Thanks for reviewing

Irina
07/13/2006 12:58 pm
What a fun story! I really enjoyed it. Please continue, i'd love to read more. :)
I'll do my best. Glad you had a good time reading.
Thank you for leaving a review!! :)

spikes mrs class
07/13/2006 12:51 pm
miss let us read your story in our class we think it great and we know who romeo is now class 12a
Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it :)

fallen_angel
07/13/2006 12:02 pm
ROFLMAO! Deedo, you're amazing!:D
Yes there is interest in a smutty chapter two, bringing the total no. of sequels you owe us to 2. Might I add that Buffy's *woe* is one shared by girls all over the world. I was strongly reminded of tg1982.
I'm glad to hear you're okay and that you liked it! :)
Yeah, me and the sequels... I think I'll get this one done within the next week, maybe. But the other'll have to wait until I'm done with my exams *sigh*
Thanks for the review!! *hugs*

spike'smts
07/13/2006 08:09 am
i loved a chapter two thanks for writing it for me again i love it and hope everyone else does to
yeah, I think they like it!! :) 19 reviews so far *squeal*

07/13/2006 08:02 am
Teeheehee!! The world cup certainly inspires strange behavior from males all over the planet. BTW, we are probably interested in a smutty chapter.
I'm glad you liked it. And I'm working on the second chapter :D (kinda slow, though)
Thank you for reviewing.

07/13/2006 07:59 am
oh there's much interest in a smutty chapter two!! lol! that was so cute..very well done...very amusing and realistic too...i jut hope she remembered to put her clothes back on before she left...lol :)
She did, although it would have been really funny to see her stomping around the cemetery naked :)
Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it! :)

Tonia
07/13/2006 07:44 am
That was great! Even I would ignore sex for my Edmonton Eskimos.(Canadian football) Just proves to never get between a sports fan and the t.v during play-offs.
And yes I'd like a smutty chapter two please. =)
Thank you very much!! I'm glad you liked it! :)