ok...hmmm...

nope - its a good stor and very well done

:)

Ha ha, Dawn didn't get her way. Glad that the two of them could have at least a bit of happiness in all that. This is a very sweet story. Nice and hot, too. No more denial!

OMG how come it's the first time I see this fic and why didn't i before?? This is perfection made spuffy.

Sorry, no mmean comments from me. Nothing major i see that needs fixin' , but I do REALLY love this story & want to see more! :)

great close to that little fic, though i'd love to see the rest...great job :)

I am really enjoying this story. The interaction between Spike and Buffy seems perfect given their past history and the way they have been communicating of late. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's interaction in the bar and what Dawn said to Spike and Buffy out on the terrace.

fun read, thank you. don't worry about the lack of negative reviews. there are a couple of reviewers on this site who point out, in great detail,what is wrong with stories. i have yet to find any of their tales to review. thanks for the fine read.

I like your way of getting Buffy and Spike to transition from "the bathroom scene" to having an intimate relationship again. I completely believe that no means no. However, Buffy told Spike "No," a million times and then had sex with him once for each emphatic "No."
Calling Buffy a necropheliac is hillarious. She's a nymphomaniac necropheliac.
And lastly, since you want criticism, you may want to Americanize the American characters' speach. For example, we Americans don't say "snog." We'd say "making out" or "hooking up."
All in all, a nice read so far.

I love the believable way you wrote the characters. I wish Spike and Buffy would have had that kind of epiphany. Please continue.

Looking forward to reading more,

Apocalypses have such a bad way of killing a good mood.

I have to say, if the show had gone in the direction you're taking this story, I do believe that Buffy and Spike would act very much like your portrayals. I'm liking this story very much.

And, if you want meaner reviews, start writing worse, it's your own fault!

Gotta give Spike points for trying...how can he be sure of his footing, where Buffy's concerned...but she's making efforts, so...

So much for more romance in bed...more apocalypse talk to deal with. The mood might be ruined, but they can still cuddle.