This is not good, this is so not good. I can understand his fear at being told that he is going to be made to kill one of the people he loves the most.

Why doesn't she just shoot her? Would make it much easier to kill her? You know Spike will not do it - that is for sure!

again i say oh no.

This is one of the best chapters of all!

yeah, that'll work. good read, thanks.

I bet you leave us hanging on purpose. =Þ
Update soon please! I want to see how they are going to fix this whole mess. =)

Rotten, evil slayer demon.  What makes her so certain she can get Spike to hurt Dawn?  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, noooo! This is so not good, but I figure Spike will come up with some way to get around the demon. You don't get to be a 120 plus year old master vamp unless you've got a few smarts! And on top of all that he's more motivated than he's ever been in all of his unlife. Looking forward to seeing how you get them out of this. :)

GAH! Cliffhanger! I need more, you are evil!

Oh HELL NO!! How the heck is she gonna pull THAT off? I can think of a few ways, but you are the writer, and there fore 10 times smarter than myself! Can't wait for the update!

Okay, kill Dawn *giggles* And shoot Joyce too! LoL

But geez, get to a happy spuffy ending soon or my head is gonna bust!!

GRRRR AAAARRRGH. WTF is wrong with the mating claim and will Dawn figure something out?

no she can't make spike kill dawn can she i thought the mating claim stop him having to take orders from the demon or buffy even as always great update

At least she's not beating him at the moment, so hard to read it. Just wondering how she thinks she can get him to do it. We know he'd rather dust then hurt any of his girls. Feeling sorry for Dawn, she feels something's wrong but knows that they're suppose to have an intimate evening, very hard for a young girl. Great update, looking forward to your next one. Thanks for the read.

{growls}

Another cliffhanger. How will they get out of this. Please update soon.

The only thing that's bothering me about this story - the one thing that I find not that plausible - is the fact that Spike & Dawn keep being stupid enough to trust that it's Buffy talking. They've seen how suddenly the slayer can overtake her and they've seen how sneaky she can be about it, not to mention what a vicious bitch she is. The smart thing to do would be to chain her up and keep her tranked for the duration. They're smart people, so why aren't they being smarter about this? Still enjoying thih story thoroughly, but getting tired of the split slayer bit - ready for the truth to come out about Willow's spell. Can't wait for that to happen! Great job as always.

Wow, and the utter baddness continues. (Plot badness, not writing quality badness, b/c I think you're stories are awesome.) Darn cliffhangers! Can't wait for the next update.

Yeah, right, bitch!! There's no way that's happening. No way you can make him do that.

WHAT!!!!!!!!.......shes joking right....right??????.....she cant be serious....*nervous*....hehe anyway great chapter as always

Sigh. Just...sigh. Nothing else I can say about it.

That was evil! :)

I think the claiming's pushed psychobuffy over the edge into megalomania!

I'm exhausted!! Poor Spike with all the beatings!! Buffy's demon needs to go down, so here's hoping Spikey comes up with a plan and Sawn figures it out.

I'm exhausted!! Poor Spike with all the beatings!! Buffy's demon needs to go down, so here's hoping Spikey comes up with a plan and Sawn figures it out.

I'm exhausted!! Poor Spike with all the beatings!! Buffy's demon needs to go down, so here's hoping Spikey comes up with a plan and Sawn figures it out.