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Deliverance by angelic_amy
Chapter: Interloper
06/02/2007 03:26 pm
OH that was good,
12/02/2006 05:20 pm
how much am I loving Spike and his petulance at not being treated with the right amount of fear and respect. I would have paid good money if he had actually stamped his foot. At least he got her to have a reaction besides just apathy, although trust him to ruin the moment with an ill-timed phrase.
I'm glad you enjoyed that! Spike can be such a child sometimes, and I really wanted to show that. LOL. Paid good money huh? I'll keep that in mind for future chapters.
sirc
08/30/2006 02:56 pm
well done :)
Thank you!
Robyn
08/19/2006 12:04 am
I loved Buffy and Spike’s meeting and how dismissive she was towards him. It was really funny seeing him get so ticked off because she wasn’t afraid of him. I found the whole chapter humorous but as much as I hate to admit it, I really found Buffy kneeing Spike well deserved and funny.
I'm glad you found it funny! Quite the contrast from the chapter before, huh? Very happy to hear you are enjoying the story. More will be up soon.
harvestmoon
08/07/2006 06:52 pm
delicious! update soon! loving the Buffy-Spike banter!
Thank you! The next chapter is with the beta so expect an update soon. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Joan
08/03/2006 05:11 am
Oh, this is going to be fun! It seems no matter how down Buffy feels, Spike brings out her feisty side. Their entire conversation was a riot!!
I'm glad you think so! The chapter was a lot of fun to write and I truly hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Lou
08/01/2006 09:30 pm
Love the snark! This is one cool Buffy, and she's running rings round Spike.
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter! Buffy has zero respect for Spike so it always makes things amusing. More will be up soon.
08/01/2006 05:37 am
Awww dammit Buffy, you know you want it!
But that chapter was hilarious... Spike is always so amusing ^.^
But that chapter was hilarious... Spike is always so amusing ^.^
Glad you found the chapter amusing!
Jessica
08/01/2006 03:32 am
Love it so far. Looking forward to more.
Good to hear you're enjoying it. More will be posted soon.
mamadd
08/01/2006 03:13 am
yes enjoyed it very much
Excellent! Thanks for the review.
Esther
08/01/2006 02:49 am
Oh wow, this is fantastic!! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!
Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you're enjoying it and hope you continue to like the story.
golddrake
08/01/2006 02:21 am
great chapter
Thanks!
v ladt
08/01/2006 01:10 am
well spike, that could have gone better! great read, thank you.
It could have gone better, couldn't it? LOL. Glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the review!
08/01/2006 12:42 am
Great chapter! Love the banter between them. Here he is a master vamire and she's treating him worse than a fledgling, almost completely dismissing him, she really got his goat. So excited to see what you have in mind for us. Whatever you've written in the past has been soo great, can't hardly wait. Excellent read.
Thanks! Buffy was definitely being dismissive and you've gotta love indignant Spike. He can't NOT stick up for himself. LOL. I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic, more coming soon!
08/01/2006 12:40 am
*that* was awesome...loved that confrontation, very well done indeed...i thoroughly enjoyed it....buffy's barbs had *my* eyes widening and my jaw dropping in a "did she just *say* that?" kind of way...lol...very hilarious and edgy and sexy and perfect...okay...you've got me addicted now so bring on the updates :)
Thank you so much! *blushes* I am so happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter. Buffy was very cavelier with her comments, wasn't she? Addicted? YAY! More will be up by the end of the week.
07/31/2006 07:51 pm
Oh my god *gasps for air* This was a hilarious chapter! I must say, I just love the way Spike is written. And Buffy too of course! For some reason I just giggled my way through this chapter. The whole insulted Spike thing is really funny. I feel a little sorry for him though.
Really? Wow! I'm so glad you enjoyed it sweets! I was trying for snarky humour so am glad to hear you found it amusing. I've never written Buffy or Spike this early in the canon before so saying that you think the characterisations are good is a HUGE compliment! Thanks for the review sweets!
07/31/2006 07:15 pm
LOL, Love it. All nice and snarky, but all the UST.
Snark and UST - that pretty much sums up this story so far! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Cherie
07/31/2006 04:36 pm
Love It!!! Keep feeding your muse whatever you are youv'e got me wanting to read more that's for sure!! Good Work
Cherie
Cherie
I'm stuffing the muse's mouth with all the little goodies he demands so fingers crossed it pays off! More is most certainly coming and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
07/31/2006 04:33 pm
oooh i like i like... i cant wait to see more!!
I'm glad you're enjoying it, more is coming soon!
kim
07/31/2006 03:38 pm
Wow, she really has gone beyond caring.
Poor Spike...didn't even respect him as a worthy opponent. And then, to slam him in the family jewels? That's just mean!
Poor Spike...didn't even respect him as a worthy opponent. And then, to slam him in the family jewels? That's just mean!
She has, hasn't she? In her mind her entire world has been taken away from her. As for Spike... he means nothing to her... so far. *grins* Which is why she is getting such a kick out of the beating and banter. More will be up soon!
07/31/2006 03:35 pm
I like it so far. Keep going! Love the banter.
Thank you for the feedback, it's much appreciated!
07/31/2006 03:33 pm
HEE! Awesome! Loved it, can just see the stunned expression on his face! rofl
Glad you enjoyed it! I really wanted Spike's expressions and gestures to be believable so very happy to hear that you could picture it!
zanthinegirl
07/31/2006 03:23 pm
Hee! Enjoying this very much; you really captured the feeling of their season 2- 3 interactions. Looking forward to more!
I'm glad you think so! I've never written something this early on in the series before so it's nice to hear that it's believable. More up soon!
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