Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Comes a rattle and hum

06/13/2007 09:36 pm
I so hope that Willow is going to pay

11/26/2006 02:29 am
i have to say it's probably what she deserves at this point,and will certainly simplify matters a lot...good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next :)

sirc
09/14/2006 08:58 pm
Well done :D

All4Spike
09/13/2006 11:23 pm
Over the past few days I've read right through 'Origins' and 'Revelations', and I'm sitting here panting for more.
Pure genius, that's the only word for it all.
A sequel? Absolutely Imperative. We have to find out about how Buffy & Spike raise their children and Connor and follow their magical exploits.
Poor Willow, but she always did have that touch of arrogance about her abilities, and the control thing.
I'm delighted to see Xander finally beginning to question his irrational jealous hatred for Spike.
You've ket everyone so much in character it's as if I'm reading about an actual season of programmes... bl**dy brilliant!
Keep up the good work, I'll be checking in daily impatiently waiting for updates...

lilmamaday
09/12/2006 11:55 pm
I just caught up on the updated chapters and I am still loving this story! I for one would love to read a sequel to this! You are one of my favorite authors and I can't wait to see how this one ends!

Bigbird
09/10/2006 07:21 pm
I'd forgotten about this one lovely to finally catch up with it...keep them coming I love this, it keeps getting better.

DizzyB
09/10/2006 05:49 am
Loved it, as usual. I'd be thrilled to see a sequel and would gladly follow it as I have the others.

vladt
09/10/2006 05:15 am
what a great chapter, thank you. love where you have brought us. a wee bit of tension? great tale.

kathy
09/10/2006 12:29 am
oh, how i have enjoyed the revelations stories! thank you! I've said it before, but i hope you continue with the story/trilogy. i'm not a writer, so i can't imagine how hard it can be to write sometimes. All i know is i've read fanfiction for a while now and you are the author i have enjoyed THE MOST. Thank you again.

09/09/2006 09:17 pm
Love this fic. Thanks for giving us another wonderfully intense chapter. So glad that you have Xander doing a little self-examination and starting to see the light. Wish Willow wasn't so lost, but I don't think anyone can reach her now. You are a unbelievably talented writer. I would absolutely love to see a sequel to this fic, but even if the muse never moves you to write one, I hope that you will continue to write. I would be more than happy to read anything you'd care to write about Spike and Buffy. :)

pretty_in_fangs
09/09/2006 02:16 pm
Oh, this is getting so good. Everyone's converging and I can't wait to see what happens.

09/09/2006 02:03 pm
Strewth, the climax is really building, you really have me on tenterhooks - still waiting to find out what temporary thing is going to happen to Spike???

I'm really enjoying this, I check for updates most days and am eager for more. I generally try not to be too pushy in asking for more chapters / stories since I know you have a life to lead,but you can count me as interested in another story in this series if you have the time and interest to write one.

09/09/2006 01:32 pm
Yay for Xander - getting a grip at the last minute. Things are really getting exciting now! Love the way you have all these things going on simultaneously all building towards the final battle.

09/09/2006 01:22 pm
Another excellent chapter. I'd almost forgotten about the Huntsman - great to see him back and hunting for Willow. Looking forward to more.

Schehrezade
09/09/2006 12:29 pm
WOW!! Am itching for more sweets! And it's about time those hounds were unleashed on you know who cos it's time to pay the piper *g*

Looks like Xander's lame ass I saved the world cos of a crayong line won't be happening anytime soon ;)

And may I add I will read the sequel and still beg for more

*hugs*
XXXX

Martha Biggs
09/09/2006 11:17 am
I really hope you do continue with the story. It is very well written and I am enjoying it. Please don't stop

09/09/2006 09:50 am
Wonderful chapter! Non stop action! I will be sorry when this work is finished, so please, please write another when this is done.

09/09/2006 09:04 am
Ooh, I hope they get her, this time.

09/09/2006 08:50 am
Wow sweetie that was in incrediable story! I loved it - I can't wait to see what happens next - your evil willow is just so evil. I loves it!

Emilee
09/09/2006 07:01 am
Also I'd really like to see the interest between Jenner and Faith play out, and I know that would definately need another installment. So...'Please sir, may I have some more?'

Emilee
09/09/2006 06:58 am
First let me say that you really do like those evil cliffhangers don't you? Arghh, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. I can't tell you enough how excellent this story is. As for a sequel to this, I would be happy and eager to read any new installment to the Origins Saga. I don't have much of an attention span, and I don't usually like WIP's for that very reason, but yours is just too good to resist. Besides, I admit it, I'd really like to see Buffy and Spike's baby born and it doesn't look like it's gonna happen in this story. Whether you decide to continue on or not, the Series is absolutely awesome, and I can't believe that you'd have trouble finding interested readers if you decide to go on with it.

RandiGiles
09/09/2006 06:02 am
Belive me theres still interest!

09/09/2006 05:49 am
All I can say is "oh I for one would love a sequel"... I got caught up with Origins and then Revelations right on the heels. So much happening for all of them.

KristenA
09/09/2006 05:31 am
Deff. interest in reading a sequal here!

This chapter...god I could really feel things falling apart. An injured Dawn hiding as best she could with Connor was a really powerful image, as well as the tears that Buffy had on her cheeks.

Cant wait for more!

Esther
09/09/2006 05:16 am
Oh mama, I'm at the edge of my seat right now, freaking out with all that action. Splendid job!!

Ooh, and there's tons of interest from me---please, continue with the story. This is too good to leave without having the story told completely. You're doing a splendid job and I'll be sticking around for however long you write it.

09/09/2006 03:57 am
I've been reading this from the beginning, and **bows head in shame** rather stingy with the commenting, for which I apologize. Just love it to pieces, and if you have any doubts that a sequel is wanted, put them to rest. There seems like plenty of story left to come, and I'll be here reading until you dot your last I and cross your last T and add the final period. Brava!

Jess
09/09/2006 03:48 am
Definitely go for the sequel if you've got the ideas. I think this story is awesome!

ariadne
09/09/2006 02:44 am
miss i wanna be voldermort is classic!!!! i laughed so hard.

wonderful chapter as always Nia. can't wait to read the next one. i would LOVE LOVE LOVE a third instalment!!!

09/09/2006 01:27 am
WOW another awesome chapter.. And i would love to see another sequel to these. In this came more is better :)

Kiliana
09/09/2006 01:25 am
Yay! I've been waiting with bated breath for your updates, I love this story! Thank you.

As for a sequel, you write it, and I'll read it as fast as I can. Your story telling is fantastic, and you really have explored a lot of ideas that the show's writers never got to. Keep up the good work!

09/09/2006 01:15 am
You're kidding right? of course we want a sequel. I'd love nothing better than to see this through all of Spike and Buffy's life including their children. I want to see Spike be a father to both Conner and his amazing abilites and their own children. Hope this doesn't mean that Xander's going down as well as Willow since the hounds have been let loose. Jenner had better get there before Glynnis is dust. Gosh! this such an exciting, nail biting conclusion. So much is at stake, to much to lose, everything to win. Just love it. Hope you can update soon, amazing chapter, thanks for the incredible read.

Cat
09/09/2006 01:13 am
Holy Sh*t!! This is gettin' good. PLEASE continue!! Thank You.

kim
09/09/2006 12:58 am
Oooo, more Huntsman!

Yay, for Xander, except he's going to get himself killed, now.

The tension is really mounting.

SpaceLord
09/09/2006 12:38 am
Cry havoc and lets slip the dogs of war!!!!
I damn near used that quote. . . .

09/09/2006 12:34 am
Oh yeah Willow is sooooo going down :P

Anne
09/09/2006 12:19 am
Wonderful chapter as always !!!!
yes please continue I never get tired of reading what you write.

Tamara
09/09/2006 12:01 am
Oh, there is definitely in a sequel, right here! Great chapter. I love how well coordinated you have everything. I thought Xander might end up being the distraction for Willow not Angel , Dru , harmony and Glynnis. Looks like everybody's headed to the showdown at Revello Drive. I hope the good guys win.

Seska
09/08/2006 11:49 pm
You have me on the edge of my seat! I've followed this story from the beginning and I absolutely vote for a sequel. We MUST know what happens with Buffy and Spike's children.....