Blood Bound by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: The Heart of the Matter

Katie
09/09/2007 03:20 pm
my favourite line from this whole fic.... "you just – saw me naked, and couldn't help yourself -- thought, ‘There’s a rare fine specimen of manliness – bloody sexy, too – think I’ll just take that home with me"

lol
I dont think mere words can describe how amazing this story is... the intricate plot, the characters voices... fabulous. This is the second time I've read Blood Bound btw, and I have loved every paragraph. Again. :) my favourite story of yours by far! :D xox
lolol...glad you liked that line, love...thanx so much :)

09/25/2006 09:18 pm
good chapter
thanx :)

09/16/2006 01:35 am
There’s a rare fine specimen of manliness - Well, yeah!

This is terrific JL - best chap yet. I love the way you bring out the Buffy bad side and get her to admit it. Obviously she needs to cry some more to bring Spike around.
lol....yeah, maybe...i think he's being quite understanding, all things considered...but he never could stay mad at her for long...

Catrine
09/15/2006 08:58 pm
Finally she has come to her sences. I hope Spike will be though on her,but that she will come through it at the end:) An really excellent chapter,I had almost forgot that it startet with Buffy`s sick wish to control Spike. Great to return to that,and make her realise that is why Spike is so angry.Great job:D
yeah, that was the disturbing issue from the start of the story...but she's finally learning her lesson...

09/15/2006 08:32 pm
One thing that I can say is that at least they are talking. For now I will take what I can get.
lol...i hope that's a good thing :)

Lou
09/15/2006 07:24 pm
Superb! Everything out in the open at last.
thanx so much :)

09/15/2006 06:28 pm
Oh my...  Buffy is going to get an earful, now!  *L*
yep...and doesn't she deserve it!!

Lynda
09/15/2006 05:02 pm
The healing has begun. Thank God.
:)

Bridget
09/15/2006 03:37 pm
Good chapter. I am glad they are speaking to one another without so much anger. I know Spike needed to say those things but in order to reach some type of resolution and for Buffy to understand her dark side he needs to be kind.
thanx, glad you like it :)

pretty_in_fangs
09/15/2006 03:16 pm
I'm so proud of Spike in this chapter.

I did find it amusing, reading the reviews from last chapter, how everyone seemed equally divided into thinking Spike was behaving horribly and thinking Buffy was behaving horribly. I thought you wrote them both quite well, and neither knew exactly what to do.
lol...i did too, pet...thanx, glad you liked it..i too, am taking neither side...as i said before, they're both right and they're both wrong in this...

09/15/2006 03:14 pm
Very interesting chapter with a big breakthrough for Buffy.
thanx, glad you like :)

09/15/2006 08:01 am
hehehe naughty leaving it there! :) I'm glad they are talking though. They'll be ok...eventually. :)
:)

09/15/2006 08:01 am
hehehe naughty leaving it there! :) I'm glad they are talking though. They'll be ok...eventually. :)
thanx, pet...appreciate it much :)

Tonia
09/15/2006 05:33 am
I like this chapter. They are finally talking and listening. That's good. Though knowing them, it won't last long. Those two could have a fight over how to drink properly. ;)
thanx, glad you like it ;)

09/15/2006 05:31 am
Perfect title for the chapter, that's for sure. That last line was pure Spike. Sooo happy that they're getting this out in the open. It's just what they need. Amazing chapter, thanks. Update when you can. I needed some Spuffy lovin'!!! Soon!
thanx so much, glad you liked it :)

vladt
09/15/2006 05:16 am
absolutely wonderful read, tkank you. thought it would take several chapters to accomplish what you did in this marvelous read. thanks, again
thanx, glad it worked :)

Mr_Chaos
09/15/2006 05:10 am
A very, very nice chapter. And I don't think some of the Spike Haters can get mad. Spike showed compassion, and healso showed tenderness. And he is working.

As is Buffy, I'll admit. Though, granted, a wish a comment would be made about why would it havebeen so bad if she was part demon? She's mated to a vampire. What isthe bigdeal?

UNless she's a bigot. Which,in some ways, she isto demons.


LOok forward to next part.
well, as the slayer, she kind of has to be a bigot toward demons...she has to kill them as her calling...so it would be difficult for her to accept...

Dee Bradfield
09/15/2006 04:36 am
Bravo. All the torture in the previous chapters was almost worth it just so we could get to this point - to give Spike the power he needed to make Buffy realize how arrogant her decision was.

There's going to be some major fallout from this, I'm guessing. Especially in regards to Giles and Willow, who aided and abetted.
thanx, glad you enjoyed it :)

FetchingMadScientist
09/15/2006 04:19 am
I was wondering when the "R word" was going to be mentioned. I'm right with Spike in this. And isn't it just like Spike to try and deflect the emotions of this to try and make things better for Her? I'm not sure I would do that. But, that's Spike.

Also, I have read other comments on other sites and here as well, and quite frankly... I am not sympathetic to Buffy...at all. Maybe that will change as I read on. Now though, I am completely in Spike's corner in this. Good chapter. :)
yeah, what she did to him was definitely a violation in more ways than one....it's funny, the reactions seem pretty much split down the middle, buffy's camp, spike's camp -- but i'm just trying to write their reactions objectively, how i feel they might react in this scenario...they're both right and they're both wrong...

09/15/2006 03:26 am
Very intriguing, thought provoking chapter. You really go right straight to the heart of the matter, don't you. Buffy's really never had to face the darkest part of herself before, has she? That's gotta be tough. Spike's had a lot of experience dealing with dark side of himself, not to mention others, so maybe he can help her with that. If he wants to, that is.
yeah, it's gonna be a hard, but necessary, step for her to take...

09/15/2006 03:19 am
Hey, watch it bub *narrows eyes at Spike* or you won't get anymore slap and tickle

And totally loved this line: “I was telling myself it was more like you just – saw me naked, and couldn't help yourself -- thought, ‘There’s a rare fine specimen of manliness – bloody sexy, too – think I’ll just take that home with me’.”
lol...i thought you might like that bit, pet :)

kim
09/15/2006 02:22 am
Thank you!!!! Every point of his was spot on...what I've been thinking the whole time...but you know that by now. :)

As for her last question....that requires a long answer. One flaw is that Joyce and Hank raised her as a spoiled little girl, so Buffy has always felt entitled to what she wanted, even before she was the Slayer. 2) After becoming the Slayer, she took that fight instinct and made it a part of how she dealt with all problems, i.e. punching people in the nose just for being annoying. Instead of growing as a human being and dealing with issues in a more mature fashion, she used her fists if she didn't hear what she liked. 3) That constant internal lie and denial crap. I've never seen someone so resistant to becoming self-aware. 4) Enough with the "I have to be stupid because I'm blond" routine.

And therapy for those abandonment and insecurity issues would really be a good idea!! She took that crap way to close to heart, when it really had nothing to do with her.
oh yeah...and a long answer she will get... :) there's a lot of deep-seated issues here that need to be dealt with....

09/15/2006 02:18 am
Letter perfect in every way! This could have been a season 7 conversation for that matter. This is absolutely true to character, not just your story. Bravo!

As to the story alone portions....hope she has a sit down with Giles too. After all his motives were even more frivolous for this than hers. At least Buffy had her deeply submerged desire for Spike at the core....Giles just wanted his bathroom back and Spike out of hs responsibility! For that he was willing to subject Spike to servatude at the least! Then there's Willow and her Angel like holding back of the truth......

Wonderful as always but this chapter in particular is stellar.

Kathleen
friended you on the LJ BTW....Welcome!
thanx so much, so glad you enjoyed it...