Boy Good by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Four

BuffyRat
05/28/2007 04:50 am
Spike, leaving, yeah right. All the ways she should know better by now. And some secrets are out in the open. Looking forward to more.
More follows. :)

10/04/2006 07:37 pm
Still loving the story. I love the way you're writing Riley. So true to the show and such an arrogant, clueless boob.(Is my Riley dislike showing?)
I must say that I hope the iniative doesn't get Spike. I know it happened but I like the idea of him changing without the impetus of the chip.
Great story.
Hee! I don't really dislike Riley - he just keeps behaving like an ass in my fics...wonder what that says about me?

Robyn
09/21/2006 07:24 am
Interesting and fun twist having Riley find out who Buffy is this way. I loved all the different things Buffy admitted to Spike and that she told him that she wanted him to leave before something happened and one of them had to kill the other. She really is living in denial and stuck on the illusion of normal. I groaned when I realized that I had run out of chapters, I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to the next update.
I'm glad you're liking it - the next two chapters have been beta'd and as soon as I makes the fixes, I'll post them. Thanks for the steady reviews!

09/19/2006 02:16 am
I find it hard to believe thag Spike would just leave. But at least Buffy has no major secrets from Riley and it was funny to see Riley trying to be the big and bad man only to be showed up by Buffy.
Well, Buffy may have kept just a few secrets...

Lou
09/18/2006 09:15 pm
King Riley the Clunky! Hilarious.
:D

Bridget
09/18/2006 07:13 pm
Good chapter. I guess Spike will be captured by the initiative. Although I hope not. It would be interesting to see how their relationship would progree without the chip. I really can't stand Riley. I hope you take care of him soon.
Hee. Somebody's going to take care of him, I imagine...

09/18/2006 11:44 am
Gott say I am pleased this is turning into a multi chapter story....each a delight. Keep it coming (so to speak).

Kathleen
Thanks. It's sweet of you to say so.

vladt
09/18/2006 06:12 am
fun read, thanks. buffy is delusional
As always. lol thanks for reading.

Lynda
09/18/2006 04:56 am
Buffy kissing Riley--yuck! At least I know that Spike will not go far. Will you put a chip in Spike's head? I hope not. Please don't.
to chip, or not to chip? Haven't actually decided yet, but I'm working on that chapter, so we'll see...

~*~Tasha~*~
09/18/2006 04:26 am
{growls, kicks and growls again} Damnit Buffy! She is so stupid. She is still going to try with Riley? Idiot ... both her and Riley.

Good update.
lol

Shanna
09/18/2006 03:54 am
Ah but Buffy DOES need Spike around to complicate her life!! Please complicate away!!!
Hee! He will. Rest assured.

Shanna
09/18/2006 03:53 am
Ah but Buffy DOES need Spike around to complicate her life!! Please complicate away!!!
I'll do my best.

09/18/2006 03:33 am
Ewwww Riley lips.... *throws up*
LOL

09/18/2006 03:15 am
awwwwww. i hope spike gets the gem of amara...then he can take her in th e sunshine and it'll be fine. :)
Is that a hint, Zoe? LOL

Cas
09/18/2006 03:15 am
Wow, you've really turned this into quite the story - plot and everything! Good for you. Plus, we all hate Riley - kill him off soon, please?
yeah -plot sort of snuck in there. :) I'll do my best to see that something bad happens to him.

09/18/2006 02:46 am
I almost feel sorry for her, I said "almost". She's knows that Spike's not your average sexy, drool worthy, master vampire. And how can she put up with Riley's condescending attitude, anyway? One day she'll learn, I hope and soon, that Spike's all she needs. Great update, thanks for the read.
thanks for reading.

09/18/2006 02:39 am
yeah...sure he's gone.... *rolling eyes*...great chapter, love :)
Hee! Well, he might have tried to go...

Esther
09/18/2006 02:30 am
'He hasn’t figured out that Spike’s a vamp. How dumb is that?' Best line to describe Captain Cardboard!! LOL!! Loved it!! Go Spike with all your nummy goodness! Whew, wish he'd beaten Riley black and blue---would've made me happy. Great job, hon, can't wait for more!!
LOl thanks!

kim
09/18/2006 02:21 am
Oh, Buffy.....

Ooo, I hope Spike doesn't get captured by the Initiative! They're very, very mean.
Yes, they are. Sigh

09/18/2006 01:56 am
lol, *shakes head* poor delusional Buffy, has she learned nothing? *dramtic sigh*

Great chapter!
:) Thanks!