In some places I'm having a hard time figuring out who you are talking about when using 'he's and 'she's . It seems like you have used both for William.

The writing needs some polishing, but I like the idea :)

I really do enjoy the sweetness that is a part of Elizabeth's and William's romance.

very easy read. and enjoyable. but now the unpleasantness, i would guess. thanks for the fine read. now on with the tale.

Hmmm....interesting idea, everythings the same yet different. So Angelous and Dru had a baby girl, named Elizabeth, who sounds amazingly like Buffy, down to her, hazel/green eyes, some say hazel some say green.

She grown old and gets married to William, then something happens I take, killed by the Council of Wankers my guess...it's never good when Travers name is mentioned, and from the prologue sounds like she might have been pregnent at the time.

So then Dru turn William, because she either is crazy, is mourning or had a vision of Buffy coming back...I don't really know.

Well certainly got my braincells working, can't wait to read what actually happens....though I seriously hope Angel and Buffy does not happen...*shudder*

Wait William Giles? Wait don't tell me she actually gives birth to a boy who is taken by the council, and Spike turns out to be Giles' Great time many grandfather? That would be Brilliant.

Well great start so far.
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Harry

wow..excellent chapter, so glad they're engaged...curious to see wht will happen when angelus and dru come back into the picture..