Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Never hit softly

06/13/2007 09:47 pm
Glynnis shouldn't have gone against him. {Sighs} Poor Hawkins. He is going to grieve. Dang ... so much action all around in this one.

11/26/2006 06:29 am
well things seem to be going in their favor at least...loved spike and buffy taking on angel together...and i have to say you've described this fight scene perfectly, i can picture it, no gaps or inconsistencies...very well done :)

09/30/2006 04:09 pm
wow incrediable well done - wopnderful fight scene and absolutly incrediable ending scene - wonderul emotive - i love it

09/29/2006 06:59 am
MORE MORE MORE...loving this soooo much!

sirc
09/26/2006 03:29 pm
Loved it :D

pretty_in_fangs
09/25/2006 07:29 pm
Wow. I swear, your chapters just keep getting better and better.

09/25/2006 03:12 pm
Okay, can I just say that I love Jenner. Buffy and Spike are doing everything to help their family and to see Wes step up and help Dawn, Tara and Connor was awesome. Wonder what is going to happen with him and Dawn? And Go Giles for his handling of Dru. I am just glad that Spike and Buffy really have this support system in their fight with Angel. Just love the chapter.

aonadharcach
09/24/2006 07:25 am
Thanks for the wonderful chapters! Your stories are my favorites and I'm looking forward to the next installment. :)

Sonja
09/23/2006 09:59 pm
A great story, brilliant, just keep going! I don't normally read any stories unless they are complete but hay...there are exceptions and this is one of them. Congratulations on keeping all the threads & plots together. Magic!

vladt
09/23/2006 09:50 pm
fantastic read, thank you.

Emilee
09/23/2006 06:54 pm
You really know how to leave readers wanting more. Can't wait for the next update.

09/23/2006 04:09 pm
GAH!!!!

CLIFFHANGER AGAIN, YOU EVIL, EVIL WOMAN!!!!

Okay, got that out of my system... *LOL* Can I just say how much I have been enjoying this series of yours? It is probably one of the best ones I've ever read, and I've read a lot of fanfiction! Please please update soon!!

Kathryn
09/23/2006 04:00 pm
Fantastic!!! I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

kimberly adams
09/23/2006 11:15 am
sorry its been awhile but I just finished all the new chapters and this story is the best!! I get so excited to see the updates posted!! Keep it coming and I will review faithfully. I promise you that!

Kim :)

09/23/2006 08:42 am
I'm thrilled and delighted to find that you've given us another non-stop action packed chapter to enjoy. Thank you! I love how protective Spike and Buffy are of each other. And I'm absolutely delighted that Jenner has to decided to weigh in on Spike and Buffy's side. Looks like things are quickly coming to a climax, and I can hardly wait. By the way, hope you're feeling much better, and that autumn will find things going much easier for you.

margaret
09/23/2006 06:41 am
awesome as usual. can't wait for the next installment

09/23/2006 06:15 am
I love this story, and I'm so glad you're feeling well enough to write again. Cheers!

09/23/2006 05:38 am
You know the suspense is killing me, right? You're doing it just to torture me. You can admit it. Between you and Sara...

Awesome as always, darling! Whoooo! Check out the sweetness of Wes and the quick, unconscious smoochies. Total 'awwwe' moment!

Go Spike and Buffy with the tagteam Angel ass kicking!Only those two would take the time to be all sweet and protective of their honey while beating the hell out of the great forehead.

And, ouch! Looks like Dru got a lucky bite in there. She's so gonna wish she'd sunk her fangs into somebody else...

Oh, man, Nia. I'm on pins and needles here, waiting for the next installment.

Adriana
09/23/2006 05:36 am
Nia, I am on the edge of my seat!!

Amy
09/23/2006 05:24 am
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Just thought I'd tell ya... :) Can't wait for more.

09/23/2006 05:11 am
I feel sorry for Hawkins but he what was going to happen. Great fight scenes. How sweet Wes is to Dawn. They're an awesome team. Now waiting for the hounds to arrive. Just so happy that you've updated, thank you for this amazing fic.

kim
09/23/2006 04:04 am
That, was intense! You're so good at these kinds of scenes...I've winced in sympathy, and gasped, and cheered...

More, please. Great stuff.

Esther
09/23/2006 03:03 am
OMG!!!!! More, please!!!

09/23/2006 02:41 am
Fabulous fight descriptions - I really can picture the action. Normally I zoom over these parts in stories, but you are doing such a great job that I don't want to miss anything.

DizzyB
09/23/2006 01:55 am
Awesome, absolutely awesome as always. (Talk about alliteration!)

09/23/2006 01:18 am
I think that this is my favorite story that I'm reading right now. I hope you'll update soon and that real life won't be too harsh.

09/23/2006 01:12 am
*hugs* is beautiful, great plot, great execution, everything is perfect :(

Tamara
09/23/2006 01:08 am
Great descriptions of all the action . I could really see it all. I can't wait to see what happens next.

09/23/2006 12:55 am
amazing chapter. can't wait for the next one.

SpaceLord
09/23/2006 12:53 am
Oh Glynnis got it.....now how long until the dogs get there? I hope they do some massive damage.....feral dogs from hell should be nice.

Pam S
09/23/2006 12:44 am
Action packed.. the fight is on.