Boy Good by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Six

03/07/2009 11:52 pm
A very well written chapter.  As always, I hate Riley and Maggie.  
Well, it's awfully easy to make them villains - especially Maggie, cause she was!

BuffyRat
05/28/2007 05:12 am
Knew he wouldn't leave her. Always better when they're together.
Yep, usually is. :)

DoWnEr
03/23/2007 10:33 am
Yea... a big ass fucking whore.

Thought she would at least be ashamed to have spread her legs for a child abusing sob who likes to beat up the equivalent of a crippled person, while he's down.

I'm a guy and i know i would be disgusted with myself if i found out i slept with a woman that kidnaps and tortures kids. But than again i guess women think differently

ftfchris@hotmail.com
Totally not getting this response. If you don't like this Buffy, shouldn't you have stopped reading by now? And, yeah, definitely think we're having gender gap here...

11/30/2006 04:54 pm
Loved the chapter! However, I'm wondering why didn't the vengeance demon just teleport out? Or is that a priviledge as Anya suggested?
Stay with me - you'll see why.:) Think about what "justice" demons do...

~*~Tasha~*~
09/26/2006 02:13 pm
Now they've done it. They've really ticked her off. Now she's found out that Spike didn't leave her (which I am glad of), and Riley showed just how much of an arse he is. Though Maggie throwing Buffy in there with Spike and Riley objecting was a nice twist. He's like a bigger version of Xander. Demons all bad except the ones I want to date.

Excellent update.
Thanks! yeah, it wouldn't be realistic for Riley to go from caring (if stupid) boyfriend to total bad guy too quickly.

Mefiant
09/25/2006 12:36 am
Finally got a chance to sit and read this and I love it. Can't wait to see what happens next so hopefully Riley can get his.
LOL All in due time....

All4Spike
09/24/2006 06:31 pm
I always wondered what would have happened if they'd decided to do 'experiments' on Buffy. Now I'm waiting to find out........ {drums fingers while impatiently awaiting updates... although there's no TBC at the bottom.... looks hopeful}
TBC lol

vladt
09/23/2006 10:33 pm
very good update, thank you.
:)

09/23/2006 09:24 pm
Great chapter. I like Buffy offering her wrist to Spike. So nice of her.:)
She's all heart, our girl - plus she wants to get out. LOL

Opal
09/23/2006 05:27 pm
Just caught up on all your chappies...fantastic job Patti, I love the storyline.
Thanks - glad you're liking it.

Bridget
09/23/2006 04:56 pm
Good chapter. Nice twist on Buffy learning about Spike's capture and chip. I can't wait to read what will happen next.
thanks!

09/23/2006 03:12 pm
oh wow...this chapter was awesome...it ended so sweetly...but i hope they dont do anything to them while they're asleep...hope spike can get better quickly :(
Thanks. Spike recovers - more than you might think...

09/23/2006 09:35 am
awww she can be sweet sometimes... and OMG gaylord maggie and riley, how could u do that???
:)

09/23/2006 08:57 am
Fantastic chapter. Could we please have Spike and Buffy kick Riley's butt all over Sunnydale sometime soon? I'm so looking forward to that scene. Hope you update soon. I'm loving this fic.
Thanks!

09/23/2006 08:36 am
Great chapter. I'm happy the story is going to be continued. Can't wait for the next update and I hope there is some Riley-bashing. LOL
Oh, there must be Riley-bashing!

09/23/2006 08:30 am
Oh! Poor Spike! Hopefully there is much come-uppance for Riley and his goons.
Some come-uppance on its way...

margaret
09/23/2006 06:25 am
this story is getting better all the time. glad buffy is helping spike, hope they can get out! please update soon
:)

margaret
09/23/2006 06:25 am
this dtory is getting better all the time. glad buffy is helping spike, hope they can get out! please update soon
:)

margaret
09/23/2006 06:25 am
this dtory is getting better all the time. glad buffy is helping spike, hope they can get out! pleas eupdate soon
Next chapter is with my beta -thanks for reading.

Kat
09/23/2006 05:28 am
oh wow. I love this fic. it is fun and intresting. and getting better and better
:D Thank you!

09/23/2006 05:07 am
cool chapter. love it. poor spike. and is that halfrik?
Good guess! :)

09/23/2006 04:36 am
Damn! I was hoping that he'd be spared this here but guess not. Now she understands what Riley's all about. Spike's not alone anymore and he knows that she has nothing to do with his capture. Together they're a force to be reckoned with. Another great chapter, thanks.
Thanks for reading!

kim
09/23/2006 04:17 am
*whimper* Poor Spike!

Nice difference to the story...and Buffy knew an elf? Nice to see her lack of extreme prejudice here. Down with the Initiative!

Surprised they managed to catch a vengeance demon, since she can just teleport where she wants. What's keeping her in the cage? She could ask D'Hoffryn for a vengeance wish on the Initiative, couldn't she?
Hee! Threw in the elf for the hell of it- now I've got to do something with her. lol
If there's a vengeance demon in there, there must be a reason, right?

09/23/2006 04:08 am
awww, poor Spike

Great update! Glad Buffy stood up for him and insisted on freeing him, although it only got her held captive too.
Ah, not for long.

Esther
09/23/2006 03:41 am
*bounces in glee* Riley's gonna get it....Riley's gonna get his butt kicked....WOOHOOO!!! Yes!! I was wondering what happened to pookie and got my answer. So glad that Buffy's pissed cause if she weren't I would've smacked a new brain into her. Oooh, I love it, sweetie!! Can't wait for more!! Btw, is that Anya?
LOL - well, eventually, he is. Nope, not Anya (she had lost her powers at this point)

Shanna
09/23/2006 03:15 am
Ohhhhhh, I like the twist you did here with the story. Clever and I can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for a delightful read. Now...get back to the keyboard and continue the story...LOL.
LOL Working on it.

Shanna
09/23/2006 03:13 am
Ohhhhhh, I like the twist you did here with the story. Clever and I can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for a delightful read. Now...get back to the keyboard and continue the story...LOL.
LOL Working on it.

09/23/2006 03:10 am
Oh i really like this chapter. I hope they get the elf out. And maybe they could use the help of the vengeance demon...all they have to do is push the button to open her door and make a wish. Poor Spike, but I'm glad Buffy's with him.
Hee! That's all I'm sayin....

09/23/2006 02:54 am
Very good chapter. I like the way this is getting more substantial with each chapter. Thanks!
Thanks. Yeah, kinda wandered away from the pwp thing, haven't I?

Cas
09/23/2006 02:08 am
What a shocker. Was not expecting that one at all. Can't wait for more!
Hee! More soon.

09/23/2006 02:06 am
loved having buffy get stuck in the cage with spike. and buffy's since of fair play about wanting to let all the demons out.
hee! My Buffy has a better sense of fair play than Joss's does.

Lou
09/23/2006 01:50 am
Mmmm - methinks Buffy will wise up now. And don't diss the vengeance demon, she could be useful!
LOL - yep she's there for a reason...

09/23/2006 01:48 am
Oh yeah :D they have an elf in there dumb asses, do they realizr how bad an elven clan could kick there asses???? :D
LOL - I knew you'd catch that. This elf isn't doing much except getting rescued, alas. Maybe in another fic...like the one I owe you for Christmas. lol

Robyn
09/23/2006 01:47 am
I like that Buffy reacted to seeing the elf caged up and I loved her reaction to Spike. The interaction between them and Buffy clearing up Spike’s thought that she had something to do with him being there was nice. Thank you for the update, I really enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading. More coming soon.

Tamara
09/23/2006 01:33 am
Riley's certainly showing his ignorance , isn't he?

I think he's going to learn a few things about Slayers when she gets them out of there.
Hee - took the words right out of Spike's mouth.

Lynda
09/23/2006 01:24 am
So you decided to chip him but at least Buffy is caged like him. I can't wait to see how you are going to get them out of there and hopefully remove that stupid chip.
Yeah, I wasn't going to, but it happened and they wouldn't have left him dangerous.

09/23/2006 01:05 am
Oooo the plot thickens! See you just can't to the WP part (I can't either). Yeah you and yeah us. I am loving this story. Can't wait for the dynamic duo to kick some Initiative butt.

Kathleen
Initiative butt-kicking - coming up.