~*~Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:28 pm Loved that last line of Chapter 2. Look forward to more of this one. I wonder what the Immortal is up to. Hope he doesn't try to steal Spike.

lovesbitca37 09/18/2005 @ 11:40 am I love it! The last line of ch2 is just perfect :) I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to Spike and how they find out what the Immortal is up to! Please update!

Schehrezade 09/17/2005 @ 05:43 pm Whoa how did I miss this! You're doing a response to my first ever challenge I posted! Awesome and I am enjoying it so much -- write more cos that Immortal is soooo needing sorting! And that final line CLASSIC! Keep writing

Gina 09/15/2005 @ 06:00 pm Ooh, the Immortal's got a dirty little secret! That last line was all Spike! Update soon!

Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm Great last line to Chap 2! lol I see the Immortal's being a bad boy; Spike's going to have to do something about that.

Stephanie 09/13/2005 @ 03:23 pm LOL - first love the complaint about the genes she ended up with - that was so cute and so dawn. Oh now that last line is so freakin funny. LOL... just pleased to see you ROFL! Fab - good intrique with the Immortal. Need more!

Shadowsbabe 09/12/2005 @ 08:30 pm "LOL!!!"...That line should go down in fanfiction history. Too bad Buffy's gonna to kick some major butt in the next chapter. If I was Dawn, I don't think I'd stick around to watch.

vladt 09/12/2005 @ 08:18 pm great start. thanks. love the chapter 2 ending.

spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:12 pm CM--you just keep making it better and better. Love that line--"not a stake in my pocket" LOLTIP! that is classic! you rock, Girl! now go write some more!

ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:10 am And what will Buffy say... Interesting conversation the immortal was having.

vicki 09/12/2005 @ 09:26 am great cliffhanger ending. now please give us more.

Mali 09/12/2005 @ 04:55 am O.o Has Buffy realised it's Spike yet? And I have a feeling that he doesn't know how pissed off she's gonna be. *rubs hands together in classic evil genius move*

Esther 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm Yipee, he's finally seen her and grabbed her, but don't end it there....need more...please? Oh, the Immortal is up to something....and I hope my...um....Spike isn't caught up in it....great job, and I really can't wait for ch. 3!!!

Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm It's not a stake....lol...