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The Chaos Factor by Schehrezade
Chapter: Chapter Two
11/06/2006 12:59 am
well she *is* an ungrateful bint... pfft
11/05/2006 06:37 pm
You seem to be implying that our Buffy actually read a book. Not a chance. LOL
11/05/2006 10:11 am
LOL... I had to giggle at Ripper checking Buffy out.
Well, at least they've found the coin... hopefully now they can work out a way to reverse things.
Maybe Anya might know something?... You don't live that long and not pick up a thing or two.
Well, at least they've found the coin... hopefully now they can work out a way to reverse things.
Maybe Anya might know something?... You don't live that long and not pick up a thing or two.
Hee I had to do it the pervy old git LOL! Am glad you had a giggle I had so much fun writing that scene.
Hmm the coin and reversing be warned there is loads to come ^_^
Anya may know somethings buuut she may have some distractions - have I vagued that up a wee bit :)
Hmm the coin and reversing be warned there is loads to come ^_^
Anya may know somethings buuut she may have some distractions - have I vagued that up a wee bit :)
11/04/2006 04:34 am
And the rest is....where?
LOL is coming am going to post another chapter in a sec!
demanding minx *g*
demanding minx *g*
11/03/2006 07:33 pm
Okay....I cheated and ran over to the LJ for more...more....more (and still am dying for even more). Enjoying this like a rich dessert (without the pesky increase in thigh size).
Love the moving about. Love Anya and Ripper (Xander who?). Love the budding Spuffy.
Excellent stuff.
Kathleen
looking forward to more *G*
Love the moving about. Love Anya and Ripper (Xander who?). Love the budding Spuffy.
Excellent stuff.
Kathleen
looking forward to more *G*
Ohh you naughty girl rushing off to LJ LOL! I have finished chapter 7 it's with my betas so coming soon I hope!
Oh hon you made my day enjoying it like a rich dessert you are awesome *hugs*
Xander who indeed LOL - more Ranya (or is it Ganya hmmm) coming soon!
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Oh hon you made my day enjoying it like a rich dessert you are awesome *hugs*
Xander who indeed LOL - more Ranya (or is it Ganya hmmm) coming soon!
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Neart
11/03/2006 02:35 pm
great story, I'm hooked already.
Thank you! I have another chapter going up in a second hope you enjoys??
Irina
11/03/2006 10:09 am
LMAO!!! I'm really loving your portrayal of Ripper! Things should get real interesting with Anya in the mix. Wonderful chapter! :D
I am loving writing Ripper he is just so wicked and Anya well I had to do that didn't I??
Thank you I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Thank you I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Lou
11/03/2006 09:47 am
Lovely thickening of plot. I particularly like perceptive Tara - but Buffy is so mean to Spike!! Heee! More soon, please.
Hmm is Buffy being mean to Spike or is it the whole tugging of hair and running away in the playground scenario I wonder ^_^
Tara is just always delish to write! I hope you like the next chapter!
Tara is just always delish to write! I hope you like the next chapter!
11/03/2006 06:30 am
oh i bet anya can translate it, eh? love ripper ogling buffy, she deserved it after going off on spike like that without even knowing what was going on.....great chapter, looking forward to more :)
LOL Anya bless her I have something planned for her *g*
Ripper the pervy ogler I had to do that ^_^
More coming in a second!
Thank you for lovely commenting!
Ripper the pervy ogler I had to do that ^_^
More coming in a second!
Thank you for lovely commenting!
DizzyB
11/03/2006 06:09 am
Love it!
Thank you :)
pretty_in_fangs
11/03/2006 03:01 am
Ahh.. now they should get some answers.
Just started reading. Can't wait for more.
P.S. Buffy's ready Lolita? I guess it makes sense, given her Angel relationship. ::grin::
Just started reading. Can't wait for more.
P.S. Buffy's ready Lolita? I guess it makes sense, given her Angel relationship. ::grin::
Heee Buffy has always had that Lolita vibe for me in the earlier seasons with Angel *grins* am right there with you on that!
More coming in a second I am thrilled you are enjoying it!
More coming in a second I am thrilled you are enjoying it!
11/03/2006 02:27 am
okay, who's Humbert Humbert? Ahhh Spike's jealous... and protective...
Protective jealous Spike I just love him like that! *faints*
Humbert Humbert is the main character in Lolita (he is the older man who seduces Lolita) I've popped in a link I hope it shows up!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lolita
Humbert Humbert is the main character in Lolita (he is the older man who seduces Lolita) I've popped in a link I hope it shows up!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lolita
kim
11/03/2006 01:05 am
Yeah, Buffy..a little less slut bomb with the outfits...
Funny stuff.
Funny stuff.
LOL! I was going back through DVDs of the season to see what she was wearing at that point and the wee floaty summer dress hence the pervy Giles ^_^
Glad you are enjoying it all!
Glad you are enjoying it all!
tis-kit
11/03/2006 12:28 am
I'm loving this! The big bad doing his laundry; his sudden need to protect Buffy's virtue; Giles chained in his own bath tub....
And yes it is indeed gross that he's making like Humbert Humbert but who can resist Ripper?
Intriguing plot; fluid writing; I'm hooked.
And yes it is indeed gross that he's making like Humbert Humbert but who can resist Ripper?
Intriguing plot; fluid writing; I'm hooked.
Thank you so much for such an awesome review - am grinning like a loon *g*
Who indeed can resist Ripper LOL! And Spike suddenly protecting Buffy from Ripper ogling - I had to do it!
Thank you so much *hugs*
Who indeed can resist Ripper LOL! And Spike suddenly protecting Buffy from Ripper ogling - I had to do it!
Thank you so much *hugs*
golddrake
11/03/2006 12:14 am
great chapter
Thank you I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
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