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The Hunt by spikegirl7
Chapter: it begins
01/05/2007 07:39 am
He did something he rarely does and used magic! Loved that he claimed her, haven't read a story in a while with a claim as her enemy. Can't wait for Angel to see it, it'll freak him out. Love the beginning. This should be good, thanks.
12/02/2006 12:56 am
excellent beginning. thanks for thefine read.
11/29/2006 12:48 pm
hmmm...very interesting beginning, enjoyed it very much...can't wait to see where this goes :)
11/29/2006 10:44 am
It's a really good start and I like it and I am going to read the next chapters too. I don't want to be a "spoilsport", but I think you should re-read that chapter, I think that some words were "scrambled" while posting, probably from your writing program to the posting form,I don't know, like "her body twistagaiagainst his" "protective mode w, al, although" "she needed to wthrothrough" I hope you don't mind me saying that, that doesn't change that I like the story and the plot.
i've fixed this chap, and yes, i noticed. it's because the site this was posted on changed servers, and where there were letters overlapping there came problems (often they're just random glitches). i'll get around to the rest of them in time.
11/29/2006 05:43 am
Good start! Nice brisk pace, good characterizations, and the POV flowed back and forth very smoothly. It would be an easier read without so many typos though.
11/29/2006 03:40 am
Great start Spikegirl. You're a natural.
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