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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 10 Were they blind?
01/21/2007 01:02 am
Boy is Spike going to be thrilled when he finds out he's sharing with Angel. Not.
Is Joyce going to other dimensions or making them up as she goes along? Interesting. Love the twins.
Is Joyce going to other dimensions or making them up as she goes along? Interesting. Love the twins.
12/31/2006 08:18 pm
Angel's a jerk, trying to one-up Spike because he got to Buffy first. No wonder Spike pulled a vamp face.
12/31/2006 12:38 pm
I just finished all ten chapters, and the story is wonderful! I love your original characters, the family you've created for Buffy and Spike are quite an interesting bunch. Can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
Thank you so much for reading. I was beginning to think that no one was interested in this story - which I love writing, by the way! Hope you enjoy the rest when it comes along. And a Happy New year to you and yours.
12/30/2006 10:50 am
oooohhhh... :P
12/30/2006 05:25 am
Conner's alive, well that's something at least, but what is he going to do if he's told? What of poor David, does he know the the children are not his? I can't remember. Billy looks like Darla with Spike's eyes, kinda weird. This is such a mess, I like it! This is totally going to freak Buffy and Spike out. Thank you for the update, glad you're working on Strip Snap. Interesting chapter, you know how to keep us on our feet LH.
You have hit the nail on the head. Connor and David, the two people that everyone is going to be blithely overlooking for the next couple of chapters! Except for the twins! Thanks for reviewing and liking the story. I just wish more people would give it a read. Sighs! But perhaps it isn’t everyone’s cup of tea.
time of change
12/29/2006 11:31 pm
This chapter is yummy. It's got that dreamy, before-the-storm feeling, and I love that you use weather as a foreshadowing for the shit-storm coming up.
Thank you for your comments and pleased you picked up on the foreshadowing. There’s definitely a tornado of emotion on its way!
12/29/2006 09:25 pm
I wonder how the response will be when the three are all in the same house. And if Angel will tell them about being the kids grandfather as well. That's if Billy doesn't figure it out and reveal the information first. It's telling that Billy got two contradictory responses when he focused in on his Dad, because there's the biological father out there in the world somewhere. Loved the kids thinking about the grandparents needing to lie down in the middle of the day.
thank you so much for your kind, detailed reviews. I really enjoy reading them and you make some very interesting points. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
12/29/2006 08:06 pm
Billy looks like Darla! Oh boy, this is going to be really good.
I think it quite possible that looks could skip a generation! How Angel reacts will be interesting!
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