Ugh, Buffy. I want to slap her with a frozen fish. She is so getting on my nerves. But I can't wait to find out how Will will react once he's turned and he knows that she the slayer.

Great chapter :D

So Buffy plays chess just like she plans her battles? Clever. Enjoying this!

Whoa, William moving in on Buffy fast - touching her hand, giving her presents and trying to teach the little nitwit to play chess. Another great chapter.

Absolutely lovely story. William seems so true to his character as a victorian gentleman. Buffy is working on fitting in (didn't know she could use the word "fornication") and it's fun to see them skirt around the customs. Victorian england courting must have been like two porcipines seeing just how close two people could get without actually touching. Very careful. Sorry to see that she actually forced William to "lie" to her in order to save face about the bracelet. Glad she's making it up to him. Such a great, sweet and lovely relationship possible for them in this time frame. Looking forward to updates!

Wow, so very good.
you have obviously studied this time period very extensively, which I admire because so many writers would have just slapped a corset on her, and called it a day.
Your descriptions of the different classes are particularly brilliant. As for the plot, I love how its going so far. I wonder though, if you intend to switch poin of views. So far it seems to be mostly Buffy's inner dialogue, which is great, but I sometimes feel like I want to know what William or Anne is thinking at a certain point.
5 stars! *****

Thing's are still so black and white to her. So hard her to be Buffy and not the slayer. Glad that a small part of her is listening to the Buffy side of her nature. Don't want for her to take out her prejudice against Spike, out on William, he doesn't deserve it. Does this William write poetry? Will she be the reason he run's to Dru's waiting arm's? Will she rejected him, or will her disappearence, to her own time, do it? Like I said so many possibilites. Just love your fic, can't wait for your next updates, thanks.

Oh they are so cute. ; ) I wonder how far into a relationship they are going to get though before everything goes back to normal. And I wonder if William is going to get vamped or Buffy sent back first. Can't wait for more.

Hah - I'm taking a break from judging and beta chores to catch up on fics that I actually want to read. And now I'm all caught up. So - new chapter is ok, any time, whenever you're ready...*peers around* hmmm, still not here? Oh well.

LOL I'm loving this. I really like the realistic way that you are letting the relationship develop - it is just wonderful. And I love your William.

Oh wow, I absolutely fell in love with this story. Your characterization of William is just amazing, especially Buffy's reaction to him. I like that she's still weary of him because she remembers him as Spike, but he's slowly breaking down her notions of him. Ah, can't wait for more!

I was so happy to see this story up here. I had visited your site previously and now it is gone. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Please update soon.