"OK, so it was a little slap-dash, but he hadn’t had time to work on it. Inspiration struck, and he had to comply."

wonderful -

Ooo, William in leather. Too excellent.

Your characterizations and dialogue are on spot...particularly Willow. Good start!

lol...i like this...very cute...very funny, all the characters are just adorable at this stage...xander's lines cracked me up....

“Boobie!” he crowed delightedly.

LOLOLOLOL

on to more, love ! :)

fun read, thank you. promises to be a very interesting tale.

LOL this is hilarious! reminds me of cordys "my hair!!" moment in spin the bottle! lol

So Joyce's bottle held some magic? I like it. In the Tabula Rasa style, this is going to be fun! I like that Giles and Joyce are together, but Dawn's still the odd man out, poor Dawn. So are all of them 15 as well? or just the scoobies? Nice start, thanks for sharing.

A little confusing, but a promising beginning. William seems to be older than the rest- comparatively speaking, but I guess that was because he was older to start with.

Very interesting start. i hate to think what will happen when Buffy finds her mom and the ripper. Not that her mom will even know who she is. And shouldn't dawn be around and her actual age? Will she explain to everyone what's going on with them? Nice job

Very funny, especially William in indecent leather and Buffy in her cheerleader outfit.

Very funny, especially William in indecent leather and Buffy in her cheerleader outfit.

Very funny, especially William in indecent leather and Buffy in her cheerleader outfit.

Very funny, especially William in indecent leather and Buffy in her cheerleader outfit.

Ooooo, you're posting this here too? Coo