Forward to Time Past by Unbridled_Brunette
Chapter: Chapter Twelve

Ashley
10/26/2007 02:40 am
I'm new at this and have never reviewed before, but this story is so compelling and sweet. I love the moments between Buffy and William, and he is just so adorable. I'm glad there are so many chapters ahead because I'm completely addicted.
I am so flattered that you decided to make this your first review. :) It's great to know that you're enjoying the story, and I hope you continue to. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave feedback.

08/13/2007 07:35 pm
Well, this certainly makes their... relationship or attraction become more intimate at this point, which is great! Oh, and I double checked six, seven and eight, and I see nothing wrong with the endings. I mean, they don't seem "choppy." But if you change them anyway, please let me know.
I just dislike the segways between them, and feel that they could have been condensed into two chapters, rather than three. I'm working on an alternate chapter eight, now. If it turns out all right, I'll probably be posting it soon.

03/16/2007 04:36 am
Wow, Buffy's kind of full of herself. Because Spike was in love with her, she assumes that William will be, too? I guess it's kind of true, but still... self-centered Buffy.

But Spike never told her about Cecily... so that's making things eeeeeeenteresting. Plus the sweet tension between William and Buffy. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

sirc
03/07/2007 02:24 pm
loved it :D

02/28/2007 10:05 pm
buffy is enjoying herself way too much, something has to happen. very good read, thank you.

Cas
01/11/2007 04:17 am
should be interesting

01/09/2007 06:27 pm
Love jealous William, and kind Buffy. Not sure our Buffy would understand the difference between a Victorian day dress and a ball dress, since she'd never seen one. Also, doubt she'd understand the significance of Buckingham Palace - well maybe as the place Princess Di lived. Is Anne setting up Buffy to be William's wife before he dies? He seems to be too big of a mama's boy to get one on his own. Hope Cecily causes trouble.
I think Buffy could see for herself that her dress was plain even if she did not know what a ball dress should look like. Also, as an American, I think we all see Buckingham Palace as a place of incredible beauty and opulence; Buffy would be no different in that respect.

There will be an explanation for Anne's behavior later on...but for now you guys will just have to keep guessing. ;)

Thanks for the review!

moonchic1023
01/09/2007 06:11 pm
Entranced as always and looking forward to seeing if Buffy can dance in the style of the day. Will her natural slayer athletic ability allow her to be led in the dances or will she appear clumsy? Can't wait to see!
I think her natural grace will help see her through. However, her natural exhuberance and outspokeness might just get her into trouble.

Thanks for the review. :)

01/09/2007 08:14 am
class

01/09/2007 07:33 am
Repressed, buttoned-up William is so hard not to like. And I prefer open to the possibilities Buffy. Looking forward to more of this story.
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Esther
01/09/2007 07:01 am
Squee!! I just fall more and more for this story as it grows. Love the new chapter, espcecially William taking up all the waltzes. Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much for the review. :)

01/09/2007 04:50 am
Loved that he chose all the slow one's. To be in each other's arm's. I'm just so nervous for him though, don't know when he was turned, just the year and after one of Cecily's parties. Wonder if he had the dressmaker to make his vest out of the same material to match her's? Just a thought. So excited for them yet filled with anxiety, I can bearly breath, so please update again soon, I'm ready to pass out!!!
I'll try and update tomorrow. Until then--breathe! lol

Thanks so much for reviewing.

01/09/2007 01:31 am
I'm such a huge fan of this fiction. It's one of the best time travelling stories that I've seen. I've been reading it in ff.net and I'm so glad to see that you are posting this wonderful story elsewhere. It's written perfectly and I've enjoyed rereading it over again in here. Great work=)
How nice of you to say. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and thank you so much for taking the time to review it.

BerMH
01/09/2007 12:54 am
i think I'm adicted to this story! It's so well written, and it has a sophistocation that most fan fics and even some books lack. I look forward to more!
Thank you so much for the nice review. :) I'm trying to update every day or two so keep checking back.

01/09/2007 12:51 am
I'm so glad that you are updating this so frequently. I need my William fix everyday! :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. Thanks for the review. :)

Valery
01/09/2007 12:39 am
An increidible story. Im falling in love with your work and your characters. You write beatifully and we start knowing a side of William and Buffy that be have never meet. This chapter made my day, thank you. Extraordinary...
Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much.