Just Pretending... by BloodyTearsOfLife
Chapter: Following Orders

08/14/2007 02:33 am
Buffy you big coward. Love the story.
Yeah, even if she is the Slayer, she can be a coward too.

08/13/2007 06:36 am
Great chapter. I love the interaction between Spike and Dawn. And the make out scene was hot.
Thank you!

02/04/2007 03:06 am
That's tome ..not tomb!
Hehe! *blushes* Thanks hun. Should have Slayme add it to that list she was keeping of mixed up words.

01/28/2007 01:08 pm
The idea of its being a slayer dream? Classic!

As for 'this time it's gonna be different'? Well yeah, she never married any of her exes. :)
Hehe, I thought the idea was original. :-)

Yup, marriage is a whole new concept for Buffy.

01/26/2007 02:57 pm
What a little dream can inspire lol I hope she listens to the little voice soon. Great chapter again
I don't know, Buffy can be stubborn. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

01/25/2007 06:46 am
Wow, she's going to watch it or that dream of her's is going to definately come true, which we all want! Great to see how easy Spike fit into their lives. Love the thought behind this fic, thanks for writing this great chapter.
Yup, Buffy definitely needs to watch her footing, and I think Spike is pretty good at adapting. Glad you're liking the fic and I hope you continue to do so. :-)

01/22/2007 08:10 pm
I like Buffy being civil to Spike, and see it didn't kill her either, lol. Great chappie, can't wait for more.
LOL! Yeah, Buffy needs to try that more often.

01/13/2007 07:06 pm
At least she's admitting to herslef that she feels something for him. ANd how hot was that make out session. Maybe his close proximity will help her get over her fears and really let him in. I liked his interactions with Dawn, helping her with her homework and making dinner. They could be a nice family unit if they let themselves, althoughI do miss Joyce as well
Buffy is stubborn. It's going to take her time but she'll get there. Glad you like the interaction with Dawn and Spike. I love their friendship. And I do miss Joyce too, but I'm trying not to make this too angsty. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Cas
01/12/2007 02:22 am
Spike could cook my dinner any time! LOL Dawn's getting sneaky! Wonder if the whole thing was a setup from start to finish.
Hehe, I'm with you on Spike cooking dinner any time! And you never know with Dawn. You'll just have to wait and find out.

01/12/2007 01:21 am
jebus buffy!! god damn you! If spike was touching me i'd be all for the welcoming but you.. *grumble* you like to change the subject dont ya?

awesome chapter
Of course, Buffy is queen of denial and running hot and cold. Glad you enjoyed it.

01/12/2007 12:17 am
Poor conflicted Buffy....running hot and cold as always. I love how you have her slowly starting to realize Spike isn't so bad, after all. And I'm still giggling over the lingering effects of her little shower!smut dream lol.
Do I even need to explain to you? You know how this is going. *g* Hehe, oh yes, the shower scene will have lingering effects...for a while. ^_^

Shanna
01/11/2007 05:49 pm
I have to say that I am really enjoying this story and how well it is written. I went back to read chapter 2 with Spike clutching the stone with his back to Buffy and then he says 'okay'....I could picture that so clearly as a Spike reaction and as JM would have done the scene. Just perfect.
Thank you soo much! I'm trying really hard to keep my characters true, and it's so nice to hear that you can picture it. That means I'm doing my job right! *g* Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lou
01/11/2007 10:33 am
This is so cute -- poor Buffy, always thinking she has to hate Spike!
Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

01/11/2007 10:20 am
I'm really enjoying this story, sweetie.
Admitting to herself that she's attracted to Spike? Buffy's come a long way in a short time--she should learn to listen to her body more often! lol
I'm really interested to see how the Scoobies react to the situation!
So glad you're enjoying it! I hope that little confession wasn't too much. I'm trying to keep this slower. Don't want to give too much away but I'm pretty sure that the Scoobies will make an appearance. You'll just have to wait and see. ;-)

Jessica
01/11/2007 08:53 am
I was rather surprised that Buffy already admitted that she was attracted to Spike. Granted she only said it to herself, but that is more progress than usual. ; ) Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Well, she only admitted it to herself in her head, so it's not like she said it out loud. I mean, after jumping Spike at the door, it was pretty obvious she was attracted to him. *g* Thanks for reading and reviewing.

01/11/2007 07:50 am
grr....the story's awesome, but i'm so mad at buffy...she allows things to go that far, and then knocks him down just for kissing her? when *she's* the one who up'ed the ante in that little scene? if she doesn't straighten up her act, the way she treats him, asap, she'll *still* lose dawnie -- when the social worker accuses her of domestic violence! lol...but still mad at her...:P
excellent chapter, love, looking forward to more :)
Well, that's how Buffy is. I'm trying to keep the characters as close to canon as possible. Buffy will get her act together eventually, it just takes time. Thanks for reading. I'll have more up soon.

gaillee
01/11/2007 07:42 am
Very good! The characters are so true. Buffy still in denial, Spike...oh, well, you know. Will be watching for updates.
Hehe, repeat review!

gaillee
01/11/2007 07:42 am
Very good! The characters are so true. Buffy still in denial, Spike...oh, well, you know. Will be watching for updates.
Thank you! That is the thing that I'm working the hardest on, keeping the characters true. So thank you for the huge compliment. I'll have more up later this week.

kim
01/11/2007 06:58 am
Well, he certainly took the husbandly duty to heart!
Hehe! Of course he did!

01/11/2007 06:54 am
And there's the hot and cold Buffy we all know. I'm enjoying the story so far, can't wait to see how well things go over with social services.
Glad you're liking it so far. Hope you continue to do so. I'll have more up soon.

01/11/2007 06:26 am
so buffy, almost coming out of denial, then running back. very good read, thank you.
Well, that's how Buffy is. Glad you enjoyed it.

01/11/2007 06:14 am
Oh, yeah, they were totally slayer dreams. That's what I tell myself when I dream about Spike, anyway. Sigh. Why is Buffy so stubborn? I will wait patiently for your next delightful update, and thank you very much for writing!
LOL! Don't we all! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

01/11/2007 05:23 am
Eep eep eep
Well, I hope you enjoyed the chapter....

01/11/2007 05:11 am
Great update. Looking forward to more soon.
Thanks! More coming soon.