Deliverance by angelic_amy
Chapter: Unexpected

06/02/2007 05:03 pm
yep love it

01/25/2007 12:17 am
Seems Buffy got a lot more from that bite than she was expecting. I understand why Spike lashed out at her, given what she had just said to him, but could he have left the Angel button alone. It's clear that's the one thing that can really hurt her, and it isn't going to make her open to spending more time with him in the future.
Yes she did! LOL. A lot more bite. *giggles* As for Spike, I also agree. He did not need to bring up the 'A' word, that was just mean. Buffy was harsh, yes, but she's young and she's grieving. He should know better. LOL. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Lou
01/24/2007 09:52 am
A generous dose of confusion all round -- poor Buffy, convinced Angel was the only one!
Yes Buffy is confused, but I don't think it's without reason. She did love Angel and she's just sacrificed his life to save the world. That's gotta be hard on a girl! Moving on will take time. Thanks for the review.

01/24/2007 07:58 am
I can see how she'd feel like she betrayed Angel by having the best orgasim of her life by a member of his family, with only his bite. Wondering how this claim is going to affect her and Spike. Great chapter, thanks.
I'm glad you can see that! I want Buffy to be realistic, and really... at this point she still has very strong feelings for Angel. Thanks so much for the lovely review.

maraina
01/15/2007 12:05 pm
I'm really coming to like post-Becoming/Early season 3 fics. There's so much room to play with the characters of Buffy and Spike since there was no interaction between them until Lover's Walk. This fic of yours is one of the most interesting in this category that I've come across thus far and, while it's still early in the piece, if it continues on as it has progressed then I know it's going to be a favourite. Eagerly waiting for more!
Oh wow, what a compliment! Thank you so much for your very kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

01/13/2007 04:28 am
it is easy to forget how young and immature buffy is, at this age. she still is lock in on her first love. very good read, thank you.
It is, isn't it? I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks so much for the review.

01/12/2007 04:25 pm
Everything in his past, his turning, his love affair with Drusilla, his obsession with slayers, it had all been building up to this one point. The pre-show entertainment before the real deal started.
I always thought this the case. Buffy was the effulgent one he always looked for and was destined to love. All the rest were the path to her. So well put!

So typical Spike to say the very worst thing *G* but at least Buffy isn't just wallowing in misery anymore. Just give her time.

So glad to see this updated. Loving it!

A minor oops (hope you don't mind me pointing it out) "knocked off its access" The term should be "knocked off its axis".

Kathleen
Thank you Kathleen, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. When I'm writing I sometimes get this buzz, this feeling after putting together a chapter, or a scene, or even just a single line, and I KNOW it's just right. This was one of those lines and I'm glad you thought so too.

Spike is who is he is, brash and loud and sometimes lacking tact. LOL

And thanks for pointing that out, it has been corrected.

kj
01/12/2007 09:53 am
its really good. i like it. keep up the great work.
Thanks so much for the feedback, I'll be updating again soon.

01/12/2007 06:37 am
Spike, you can be so stupid.....
Yes he can. LOL

Esther
01/12/2007 12:57 am
Absolutely loved it! The snark, the lust, the hurt, everything. Can't wait for another!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I have a lot of fun writing this story.

kim
01/11/2007 11:53 pm
She's not getting away, now...he could find her across the world with that claim.

And that's Spike - just as precise with his words as anything else.
You might be right there! And Spike certainly is very precise, about everything. Thanks so much for the review.

01/11/2007 11:29 pm
poor buffy, so confused :( and poor spike, somehow always manages to say precisely the *wrong* thing...*sigh*...an excellent update, very much looking forward to your next :)
Yes, she is confused. :( For Spike to NOT say the wrong thing would be out of the ordinary I think. LOL. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the chapter!