I love the story, except I hate this portrayal of Buffy. You make her out to be a whinny, stupid, little bitch, which is not her character in the show at all. I like your portrayal of all the other characters however, but seeing as Buffy is one of your protagonists it does not bode well for your story that I hate her.

Awwww, go Spike. NOW maybe Buffy will see that he does love her. But she won't cuase she's stupid,lol.

Not sure how I missed this update....When is Buffy gonna get it together! She's such a dunce!

This chapter was hilarious! Especially loved the dialogue between Spike and Clem. Did a guy help you writing this? It's wonderful.

I'm wondering why Riley is still sniffing around Buffy if all he wanted was nookie. Is the guy being just plain stubborn that Buffy doesn't fall down and kiss his feet? And how is Buffy managing to hide her pregnancy at this point from the git?

The soda crackers and cold cloth alone should be worth HUGE bonus points. Let's see how she manages to twist that around to something evil.

I liked Clem's advice. I think he's gonna make a bundle.

awww...he wants to take care of her, even if he did freak out a bit to start with..she needs to forget evil riley and go for spike....grr...great chapter, love, very much enjoyed it :)

aww.. buffy stop being so dramatic and see that the soda crackers mean so much more!!!

The tiny rapprochement -- a faint glimmer at last. Cool Dawn.

Love that all the demon's are beting on the pair. Clem's going to clean up! Would Riley do that for her? NO! He's got to just give in and do the right thing for everyone, including himself. That was a fun chapter with Clem, thanks, ST.