I knew that was going to happen. I knew it. Buffy don't you know you can't change a man over night. Now William thinks she really is a carefree woman huh?

well done :)

wonderful read, thank you. buffy screwed up. couldn't avoid it, different cultural values. even if she was truly understood the differences, she would still have done.

This is just an awesome story, I really love it. It is a totally unique look at William. Please continue soon! I can't wait for the next chapters.

You are writing the most wonderful story I have read in a great while. I have been reading spuffy for about 5 years now and I love your story! Please write more soon! God if you left it there and she was pulled back to her on time - wow - but what ever you do I know I will love! thanks for all the hard work!

Wow, it's a miracle William didn't have a heart attack. that was great.

Wow! What a lovely chapter. And that line in the middle: "And in the span of a few brief hours on a rainy January night, everything between them changed." Just about killed me. Such a beautiful sentence, but it just made reading the rest of it, knowing what was going to happen, even harder. I can't wait to find out how he will react to her when he gets back. And will Buffy try to explain her past? Maybe she could start with something vague so she can guess how he would react. Maybe something about magic that can be written off as childhood whims if needed. ; ) lol I'm sure you'll think of something. But until you post I'm just going to be thinking about it. *hint hint* More please.

She wanted so much to release the passion in him that she sent him running instead. She has little knowledge of how sex is handled in that time. He's going to feel guilty, they're not married nor are they betrothed. She just doesn't get it. Any of it. William is now a total social outcast and him loving her is going to cost him, even if he doesn't care. Excellent chapter, thanks for posting here.

O_O..... I cannot believe you stopped it there....it is quite diabolical of you!

First of all--splendid updates, loved both new chapters. Second, William is a complete sweetheart, so I totally understand him freaking out with what happened between him and Buffy in this chapter. Which, might I add, is freaking HOT!!!! Whoa, mama!! Finally, the more I read, the more I look forward to new chapters. Wonderful story!!

Looks like Buffy really screwed up this time. The sad thing is that William is most likely going to make her 'seduction' all his fault.

"that warm column of velvety skin"
I don't think I've ever read or heard a more beautiful description for that particular body part.

Aw, dam those Victorian values! Im begining to wonder exactly how Buffy is going to get home. Keep going I cant wait to read more!

Wow, this is really great. I'm enjoying the way you are telling this story and looking forward to the next part. It feels true to form of both the characters and the time period. It also has a touch of sweetness to go with the impending angst. Thanks for writing the story and putting it on this site.

Well that is interesting. Too bad Buffy did not take the victorian mores to heart. He must surely think she is a loose woman. Great chapter, please update soon.

Oh, now which way will he jump? For the vicar to marry them or do an exorcism?