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Drenched by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 2: Thursday
Lou
02/22/2007 01:20 am
Phew - it's like the Olympics of sex. How will he make it be enough, I wonder?
Sigh - that's the problem, isn't it?
02/12/2007 03:41 am
Whew that was scorching. Buffy is going to stake him when she finds out about those photos.
Thanks - and shhh ... keep those pics just between me, Spike and the Bloodshedverse for now. I don't want Spike to meet an untimely end!
Caroline
02/07/2007 03:27 pm
Wow..wow ..Riveting chapter.
Love your Buffy 's voice . Your Spike sounds a bit more .. how to put it ? Possessive and commanding than i'm used to . I even want to say evil. ;-) This is interesting and exciting.
The sex is insanely hot and powerful.
"For this one, the only taboo was admitting that she might like any of it." Spike always guessed Buffy right. And of course it won't be enough to stay in the shadows.
Loving this. I'm just wondering if it's going to turn really dark ?
Love your Buffy 's voice . Your Spike sounds a bit more .. how to put it ? Possessive and commanding than i'm used to . I even want to say evil. ;-) This is interesting and exciting.
The sex is insanely hot and powerful.
"For this one, the only taboo was admitting that she might like any of it." Spike always guessed Buffy right. And of course it won't be enough to stay in the shadows.
Loving this. I'm just wondering if it's going to turn really dark ?
Hey, thanks. Is it going to turn really dark? Well ... there will be more sorrow before there's any lasting joy, but it is S6. I don't plan to kill, torture or maim anyone, though, so if you're dreading the darkest of the dark, it won't be here. It might just be, well, sad in places. And it does grow a plot in another few chapters ...
02/07/2007 12:22 pm
He certainly is showing her the many sides of pleasure, most she'd never experienced before. Like an addiction, she's going to start craving him. When you've got a great lover, it's hard to say no to all that pleasure, even if he's someone she wanted to stay away from. She doesn't need the Kama Sutra when she's got Spike. Can't wait for the rest of the week. Excellent read, thanks for sharing.
"She doesn't need the Kama Sutra when she's got Spike!" LOL ... if I got that on a bumper sticker, would it make sense to anyone outside the BSV? Thanks so much for reviewing, Verda - you're the best!
02/07/2007 10:47 am
That was hot; with the last two paragraphs incredibly sad.
Thanks for reading & reviewing - and yeah, I think there's more descent left before Buffy hits rock bottom. Tragically, she's taking Spike along ...
Esther
02/07/2007 10:16 am
Whoa, mama!! Great fic and can't wait to see what's next!!
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying.
Shanna
02/07/2007 04:21 am
You know, I hope that Spike has an 'epiphany' and destroys the film and maybe finds a way to help Buffy financially. I know Joss stressed that a soul was needed but I always thought that our boy Spike could attempt good on his own...figure things out. Here's hoping.
I'm with you, Shanna - I don't get the soul thing. Still, the Spike that I'm writing isn't ready to be good yet. If anything, he'd probably post the naughty Buffy pics on the Inet and offer to split the profits! But there's always hope ... thanks for reading & reviewing!
02/07/2007 03:16 am
fun, hot chapter. thank you. those pictures are going to bite spike. but even that might turn out to be fun.
Thanks for reviewing. And y'know, I've drafted many more chapters of this, but still can't quite figure out what happens to the pictures ...
02/07/2007 01:55 am
Spike is going to be dead (or wish he was) if she finds those photos.
You got that right! But for now, I think I'll keep her blissfully unaware. She can find the pictures right after she finds her sense of humor ... and that little miracle will doubtless take a few chapters. ;)
02/07/2007 12:11 am
hmm this was smutty goodness! Spike certainly is helping her expand her skills in the bedroom. And seeming to gain a better sense of what makes her tick. Now he just needs to figure out how to use that info to get what he wants out of their being together.
Thanks, Deb. Yeah ... he's paying attention, but that Buffy just doesn't seem to know when she's got a really good thing. ;)
time of change
02/07/2007 12:09 am
Hot and educational! Also, hot!
LOL - thanks!
02/06/2007 10:28 pm
oh man that was hot..and a bit troubling, too, i have a feeling if buffy finds out about those pictures she will be soooo not happy...great chapter, looking forward to more :)
Thanks - yeah, Buffy finding the pictures would be bad. For now, Spike is going to have quite the souvenir!
02/06/2007 10:14 pm
This is awesome! I really really really love it! Please continue soon! :)
Hey, thanks! There's more coming soon, promise.
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