Living to Love Again by Jenna
Chapter: Pancakes, Dreams, and the Truth

02/11/2007 02:00 pm
oh no - another story that's too good NOT to follow. It's so hard to keep track! :)
Keep going - you've got a great beginning so far!
LOL I'm sorry! :) Thank you so much for reading! More soon, I promise! :)

02/11/2007 04:20 am
So, he did believe her. I like it. And, Xander is here just in time for fun.
I wanted him to believe her in the show, and it was never clearly defined if he did or not. I wanted him to, so hey, my story, so he believes!! :) Thanks for reading! :)

MOTCEL
02/09/2007 09:03 pm
I'm loving the story so far. And I really like the fact that xander interupted seeing how Buffy handles the whole situation is going to be extremely interesting and I really hope you don't make us wait to long for the next chapter, but I don't want to rush either lol so dont release it till you like how it looks GREAT STORY SO FAR KEEP IT UP
Thank you so much! More to come soon, I promise! :)

TwilightChild
02/09/2007 12:21 am
Wonderful chapter. I'm starting to really like this story. Xander interrupting them should turn out really interesting.
Thank you so much! More to come within the week, I promise! :)

Kim Adams
02/08/2007 10:17 pm
I wonder, how will Buffy react to her mate being attacked by Xander? A neat twist there and I can't imagine how Spike will react to what Buffy tells him. I hope he realizes that Buffy never intended to not tell him but I guess I will have to wait on you the writer to tell me...*anxiously waiting on edge of seat* :D

This is a wonderful story and I just love it! :D
Things will not go easy, but I promise, not too much angst. :) Thank you so much for reading! More soon, I promise! :)

02/08/2007 11:24 am
ARRRGGG! You just had to end it there didn't you! You are evil!

Update soon please! I want to know what happens next!
I am evil! :)

More to come soon! :)

Jessica
02/08/2007 08:04 am
Like the story so far. I hope Spike doesn't get too mad though. She was going to tell him, she just wanted to wait a bit. If only they could get rid of Xander real quick. ; ) More please.
More to come soon! Spike will have his own demons to deal with once Buffy is done.

02/08/2007 07:55 am
yep, good old Xander with his impeccable timing and his nose firmly fixed in Buffy's love life. Looking forward to more.
Thank you so much! Do you think Buffy will stand for Xander talking bad about Spike? :) More soon!

Esther
02/08/2007 07:26 am
Eeep!!! Don't stop there, please! Gah, such a fantab chapter, especially Spike's dream. Please, I beg you, more soon? Please.
Thank you so much! :) More will come soon!

02/08/2007 06:47 am
Can't wait for Buffy to explain this. Great chapter.
Thanks so much! More soon! :)

02/08/2007 06:17 am
ok, the previous statement(agreeing with buffy's reluctance to tell spike) was probably very wrong. now we have the whelp interrupting. with any luck buffy will jump all over him and his attitude. very good read, thank you.
Buffy and Xander will come to an understand eventually about Spike. Thanks for reading! More to come soon! :)

02/08/2007 05:48 am
Wow, Spike remember himself dying in the Hellmouth. Yup, they have some talking to do. Damn Xander! Glad when he gets that Spike's here to stay. I'd save Tara again and again and again, to hell with Kennedy. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, hope you'll be updating again soon.
Xander will get the message, believe me. I agree about Tara too, I loved her! More to come soon, I promise! Thanks for reading!

02/08/2007 05:03 am
Great story - I love second chances. Definitely looking forward to more soon!
Thank you so much! More to come soon, I promise! :)

katamaphone
02/08/2007 04:43 am
Awesome story. I'm completely in love with it.What a marvelous way to irradicate all the misery of season 6. Love the dialogue between Spike and Buffy and the love scenes are just beautiful, so much emotion, love and caring between them.The interactions between the other characters are really well done also. It's just lovely, truly. I especially liked the scene where Buffy is talking to herself and justifying changing past history and relationships with the line about her friends always tampering with her life; well said!I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter; can't wait!!!!
Thank you so much! I agree with you about season six. I loved it because we finally got our Spuffy, but it was so dark. So many bad things happened in that season. More to come soon, I promise!

02/08/2007 02:27 am
Ohh, this is looking good so far, very promising. (Ok, so I have a weakness for timetravel fics anyway, but still.) The bit about the dream was a clever idea, especially the physical manifestation. Even in the BtVS verse, we never saw real time-travel, so I can see the characters having a hard time to simply believe it if someone told them they are from the future. After all, even if many of us love the idea of it, trying to think about it too much - or god beware, apply logic to it - will make your head explode. But with the dream, and the burn-mark, you gave Buffy something to back up her explanations, something to build on. Well done.

One small suggestion if I may. To me, the use of asteriks as emphasis was very jarring. When you spend a lot of time on the internet, you pretty much accept it as a general truth that whenever you see text encased in asteriks, that's meant to be an action. *smiles* See. So while it is possible to use it for emphasis, it also made me hesitate whenever it showed up. Maybe it would be easier to bold things for emphasis (since italics are thoughts). The html-code is like the one for italics, just replace the i with a b.
Dia, thank you so much! That means a great deal to me! :)

I understand what you mean with the asteriks, and I think using bold is a good idea. I will probably go through sometime today and fix it. :)

Thanks again!

02/08/2007 02:03 am
loved the chapter, loved the sweetness between them, and also spike's demanding answers..the dream was touching and intense, i totally loved it...can't wait to see more, love...

oh, and a little note from your beta, i went back and double-checked...it *does* say "peckish" -- which is correct, so...not sure about the other comment...? :P
Thanks so much, DoS. You are awesome. Actually, it did say puckish when I first uploaded it for some reason. I guess word changed it? But I fixed it! :)

02/08/2007 01:58 am
Spike having the dream was very interesting...and them both having burns! Looking forward to finding out why that is happening. Eeek, Xander! *sigh* He is not going to make things easy for them, is he?

*little voice* Just one thing, sweetie... I think you meant peckish, not puckish.
No, Xander isn't going to make it easy, but will Buffy stand for it this time? :)

Yeah, I it did say puckish when I first updated the story, I guess my word changed it. :(