Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 12 Mistakes

04/15/2007 04:14 am
Love the story Lilac - the twins are great. Poor Spike, still jealous after all these years.
Glad you like it. yes, I don’t think he would ever completely believe his luck or stop having divided loyalties to Angel.

02/24/2007 07:17 am
I'm curious about why Spike can't see joyce and Billy. It does seem like they keep making the same mistakes regarding their kids.....that sending them away is going to make them feel anything other than unwanted and useless. While I can understand why Buffy would try and keep the peace I wish she would listen to Spike about how there's more to Billy than she's letting herself see. Seems like the lot of them are having issues following their gut instincts.
Absolutely and thank you for such an interesting review. You have hit the nail on the head. None of them are working from instinct, but all from what they think parenting is about. it’s going to get complicated!

02/21/2007 02:40 am
Good to see jealous Spike rear his head - not that Buffy would care about the house and car. The twins are terrific characters.

Shanny shuddered; she’d tried not to hug her dad again. - that was too cold for words. Can't imagine Spike putting up with not getting a hug from his little girl.

Is Angel up to something wicked?
Thanks for reviewing. Angel’s role in this story is an odd one. When grandparents start vying for their grandchildren’s love it can get really nasty!

02/20/2007 08:35 pm
Magic gone wrong? Wonderful! And it turns out that Shanny, Angel, Spike and Buffy are all terrible parents!
Yes, parenthood isn’t high on their list of achievements. They all love too much!

02/20/2007 02:37 pm
Those little stinkers! There all the time, listening in and knowing that everyone is worried. They didn't hear Angel say that they were his grandchildren as well? or read his mind? I hope that before this is through. Shanny completely understands that her parents sent her away because they loved her and wanted her safe and not because they didn't want her or care about her. Thanks LH for posting another great chapter, love this fic.
thank you so much Verda. Always pleased to have your opinions on my stories. I think that kid like, the children are only half listening to the adults and so getting in a dreadful muddle. Not that Angel, Buffy and Spike are doing much better!

02/20/2007 03:35 am
Great chapter! I just love this story! I hope you update soon!
thank you so much. Hope to update soon, but must get chp of Forever and a Day done first! Dratted wips. Must finish one soon.

02/20/2007 02:03 am
You broke my heart with the part where Buffy yelled at Shanny for burning Spike and she stopped hugging him. Our heroes aren't covering themselves with glory in this one, are they?
No indeed. Had a long debate on my LJ about Buffy and motherhood. I think this is a prize example of what I was trying to portray - that Buffy reacted to her daughter in a very adult way sometimes. To her it was all about teaching what happens with vampires and crosses, never dreaming of the harm she was doing to Shanny.

02/20/2007 01:53 am
maybe billy can do to angel what he, apparently has done to his sister and himself. a not being seen or heard angel is a great thing. very good read, thank you.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

02/19/2007 11:12 pm
Wow! Things sure are getting ugly between the adults, the fireworks are bound to get even more explosive when Shanny and David get there.
I enjoyed reading Shanny musings, her opinions about the twins were really interesting. Loved the closing scene, can't wait to find out what's going on with the twins. Wonderful chapter!
Yes, putting Shanny in amongst the other three is going to cause all sorts of problems. Poor David! Poor twins!

Tamara
02/19/2007 10:17 pm
I don't blame Spike for being worried. No matter how powerful they are they are still children and there is alot of evil in the world.

I kinda feel like smacking Buffy for listening to Angel. Angel should never have just shown up, he should've told Shanny who Connor was or if he felt he had to tell Buffy and Spike , call first.
I agree about Angel, and I think his presence is going to make Spike extremely angry.