This chapter was hilarious. Gotta love the cheezie weezie and twinkies fight. Very cool conversation and interractions between the characters. You definitely make dialogue interesting.

Loved the banter between them all the while dragging Spike along with them. And the Cheese trail was funny. Leave to a pregnant woman to eat that horrid combo. Never did anything that weird but eat and drank the juice of an entire quart jar of dill pickles with one pregnancy. Not worried about Riley at all. Thanks for the fun chapter, you know how much I love this, thanks.

Boo Hiss on Riley! I hope someone eventually kicks his ass!

that conversation between them about the snack foods was hilarious...wonderful, i was laughing out loud...but now riley's in there.... :( what are they going to do??? can't wait for more, love :)

Time for Buffy to befuddle Riley with her rapier-like repartee. She's really on a roll at the moment.

Oh, cliffhanger!

Loved the Xander/Buffy banter - it sounds exactly right. "I don't see you dropping any breadcrumbs, Captain Hansel." LOL.

Biting my fingernails, waiting to see how they get out ...

I love the random smarta** names they call each other. Willow's for Giles was probably the best. I have learned not to drink anything while reading this particular story--it's hard on keyboards and monitors.

Ew Riley! I can't wait to see him suffer!

ack!! no riley, go away!!!!

Damn. *Riley enters stage left* And now the fun starts. Does he honestly think that Buffy will sit by while he tries to stake Spike? Hellp, slayer speed. She can take that gun out pretty quick, and she has Xander for back up.

Great chapter. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!