Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Three

Well done :-)
06/08/2010 04:43 am
 

Lea
02/28/2007 02:43 pm
Gotta say, I like where this story's heading. Nicely done!

Thank you!

sour
02/28/2007 08:37 am
I just started reading this story and I think it is brilliant. A lot of things to wonder like why Jess hates Spike, what happened to Lieuko, how will Buffy adjust? Who was Xander's second wife? Will Buffy see willow in her new form? what happened to Anya? etc etc.
I really liked the story and can't wait to read more of this.

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. I promise there are more answers (and more questions) to come.

M
02/28/2007 02:33 am
I'm really liking this story but if it turns out that Spike & Faith had a romantic relationship I won't be able to finish this fic. Please I beg you - do not have them involved!!

Glad you're enjoying it. And romantic is such a tricky word....

Thanks for reviewing!

02/28/2007 01:56 am
Man! I'm hooked. I think these may be my favorite kinda stories. The ones where Buffy comes back years down the road. Probably cuz I'm such a sucker for angst.

Anyway, this is all looking great & I hope to hear more soon! :)

Thanks! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. The next chapter should be up some time tomorrow.

02/28/2007 01:06 am
excellent, thank you. some answers, more questions. love it. willow being a vengeance demon is not a surprise; xander is. i know it was not the reaction you were looking for, but lmao at giles being the father of xander's son.

Thanks, vladt. And yeah, I know not everyone's as big a Xan-fan as I am :)

fangfaceandrea
02/27/2007 11:19 pm
wow! i so wasn't expecting the jess Thing, and with every chapter mer questions emerge . this is going pretty damm cool.

Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

02/27/2007 11:16 pm
Whoa! I do think Willow had all the natural talents for the gig *G*. Looking forward to more reveals about what's gone on in Buffy's absence.

Maybe this Katya should come back to give Buffy a run for the money with Spike...nothing like a bit of competition after all.

Wonder why Jess hates Spike so much (and why Spike got his soul in this universe).

Point is I am intrigued completely.....more please *G*.

Kathleen

Thank you! I'm not done with Katya, but she's not going to be vying for Spike. The reveal on Spike's soul will be coming soon, and I promise the trouble between Jess and Spike will get explained soon :)

samson28
02/27/2007 03:59 pm
Interesting stuff so far. Shall eagerly await more. ;)

Thanks! New chapter should be posting soon.

02/27/2007 03:37 pm
Just started reading this fic. Very interesting. Looking forward to more.

Thanks. Hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

Cas
02/27/2007 03:03 pm
Wow, didn't really see well, any of that happening, though it makes total sense. Wonderful.

Thank you! Glad it worked.

dj
02/27/2007 02:41 pm
awesome, love it, please update soon

Thanks!

Aeryn
02/27/2007 02:22 pm
very good, looking forward to the next update
Thanks! The next chapter is with my beta now.

02/27/2007 01:52 pm
Very nicely done - got some info out, showed us how Xander has grown up, and let some hints about others things we need know.:)

Thanks! More answers to come (and probably more questions too)

smlcspike
02/27/2007 01:39 pm
So she thought Jess was a girl, up until she thought that I thought he was a guy, glad to see I was right in my thinking you never know these says.

So Spikes girlfriend left him a month ago because she believed he was still in love with the slayer and Spike thought to himself he still was just not the one she was thinking, was she a vamp and I take it Spike loved more than one slayer or did he try to move his obession of Buffy to another.

Dawns dead, thats so sad.

Thanks for the feedback! Buffy didn't think Jess was a girl, she just hadn't seen any recent pictures of him, and sometimes people look really different at ten and twenty-five :) More to come on Spike's 'other' slayer and we're not completely done with Katya either.

02/27/2007 01:09 pm
Anya cheated on Xander with Giles? I'm more of a xanya fan than ganya but I can live with it. What's Jess' problem with Spike?

Thanks! There was a whole lot of grieving and comfort-seeking going on with all three parties there. (I'm not a ganya fan myself, actually) The backstory on Jess and Spike *will* get filled in, I promise.

Pin
02/27/2007 12:33 pm
Wow - unexpected twists, especially given the fact that all of these events happened in the past. I like the way you are weaving in bits from t the show and giving us the 'what could have happened'. This is all very well done and I'm looking forward to more.

Thank you! I'm glad it all seems plausible. I wanted things to be surprising, but in a believable way.

02/27/2007 10:10 am
Love it!

First, the tension between Buffy & Spike? Well done. Good that he didn't confess, and I like the little tremor that Buffy felt, too.

Not sure I follow all the backstory on the Slayers, but it seems like that's supposed to be a little mysterious for now.

Nice twist with Anya/Giles, and Willow is a vengeance demon? Of course she is ...

Waiting for more!

Thanks for all the feedback! I'm sorry if the slayer history was too thick. There will be more details filled in as the story goes on, like Faith's return and what's the big whoop with Lieuko. Also there are three slayers now and some folks are going to care a great deal about that...

02/27/2007 09:13 am
Wow, I think there are more questions now then answers. Can't wait to find out what they all are. Hope Buffy finds out about Spike's soul soon and I want to find out why he got it and when. So Buffy has one family noe but what's left of the scoobies. What Willow did to Warren was right up there there wasn't it. I guess with Buffy gone, there was no one to keep her grounded this time. Really like how the story's coming along, thanks.
Thanks, Verda! The reveal on Spike's soul will be coming up soon (maybe next chapter). Xander did try to stop Willow, but let's just say she wasn't as receptive in this version.

02/27/2007 07:55 am
I can see Willow leaving or being left by Tara if Tara had complained about too much magic use. And I can see Kennedy jumping right in there with the "want, take, have," too. Decent exposition without being too "This Is What Has Come Before."

Thanks, nightshift! That's very much the idea that I had, re Willow. Tara will be filling in a little more next chapter. Glad I was able to exposit without being to Today's History Lesson about it :)

02/27/2007 07:41 am
Oh WOW!!!! Now things are looking interesting. It's good to see Giles had it in him, even though I cannot imagine him sleeping with a married woman! Still, sad that Xander thinks Willow being demony is sadder than Giles and Anya. I am wondering, did Spike and Faith fall for each other? Is that who Buffy smelled? And can I just say how sorry I am for the Scoobies that Kennedy got called? And the chemistry between Buffy and Spike in this-lemme hear a woo and a hoo! I thought the chemistry in Getting All Chosen was hot, but you just went and raised the bar a little higher! I have to warn you, if you bring back the pimp chain, my laptop is going to burst into flames--the fiery kind, not the mean-review kind. One last thing, then I'll go my merry way: I love that "swishy coat, fade into the dark of night thing." And was Giles Jr. checking Buffy out? Hate to diss on those Biles/Guffy fans out there, but squick. Ok, I'm shutting up now. Love the story!!

Thanks so much for all the feedback! Buffy noticed the signs of recent co-habitation, but that would be the recently-removed Katya. As for Faith and Spike... there's more story there ;)

I also have a somewhat hard time imagining Giles sleeping with a married woman, but I can also see the loss of Buffy, followed by the death of another slayer under his charge, then Willow (of whom he's quite fond) going evil causing him to act in some uncharacteristic ways. Grief and all that.

LadyYashka
02/27/2007 06:22 am
Very cool! I want to know what's happened and if Willow will make an apperance. Please update soon!

Thanks! And oh yeah, Willow is going to be showing up.

Tamara
02/27/2007 05:07 am
I like that Xander bonded with Ripper , jr and loves him like his own.

And I don't see what Willow saw in Kennedy either.She was obnoxious.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll get into more Willow back-story at some point. Part of it is that she was really shook up by not being able to retrieve Buffy from (she thought) hell, so she wasn't making the best choices when Kennedy came along...

Kimberly Adams
02/27/2007 04:59 am
I thought this was a great chapter and explained alot and I want to know more about Spike and Jesse's animosity and where it started and why. This is a really good story and I am looking forward to more! :)

Thanks! I will definitely get to what happened to make Jess so hostile. Hope you'll stay tuned!