I loved the beauty of their first time aroud,you wrote it that way,so,loved it:)

I like your version as opposed to the more graphic fics out there. Lends a touch of the special much more than just lust.

lovely read, thank you. a/n too long and very unnecessary. it is your tale, you tell it your way.

I liked Spike telling her that even if she is a demon now its her actions that matter. Although since her actions involve a lot of hitting I can't necessarily say it's not about harming innocents. I did like that their coming together had less violence in it, and that she could see it meant something special to him, even if it was hormone driven

your explanations are unnecessary, love...i thought it was lovely, an excellent way to handle the episode, in light of the differences this story has had so far along the way...excellent work, love, very much enjoyed it and very much looking forward to more :)

I'm excited I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. I like how this relationship is progressing. I just she doesn't break Spike. Cause that is what she'll do if she calls him a monster the next morning...That and I hope he doesn't say something stupid...keep them happy ish...keep up the great work.
Jace

Great chapter. I love the fact that Spike is the one trying to convince Buffy that there is nothing wrong with her.

Great chapter. Never thought about what a wanker he thought himself to be when he had to threaten the Nerds. His only viable threat was to a Star Wars figure and not the way he would have pre-chip. What a humiliation for the master vampire. Your version worked, only Buffy needed the violent forplay. Here she's not as violitile. Yup, Spike can't use his teeth but he still's got his lips and all the snark he can spill. Excellent work, thanks.