Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Four

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03/15/2007 07:23 pm
Your premise is interesting, and I am enjoying what you are doing with it. Looking forward to meeting Willow.

Thanks! She'll be making an appearance soon.

03/05/2007 12:09 am
Nice, lovely little plot twist. Now this is just - interesting. Can't wait to read more. Details, please?

Thanks! New chapter posting soon.

M.
03/02/2007 01:54 pm
It's not that I'm being unrealistic, of course a sexual being like Spike would have lovers throughout his entire immortal existance. But just because I can accept that he had the relationships doesn't mean I want to know about them.

And like I said, I get it that it's just not your thing. I'm sorry to lose a reader, always, but I also know that not everybody is going to like certain things I do with the story.

If it makes any difference, Anne was his daughter 'in a manner of speaking'. The mother is not some great lost love of his.

03/02/2007 06:40 am
Now I'm really hooked. Backstory details always fascinate me, and some of the hints that have been dropped have me itching to know more.

Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter now. More answers (and questions) to come :)

Cas
03/02/2007 04:28 am
Liked Spikes comment about it not being a curse, but why did Buffy just assume 'Anne" was his daughter, cause hey, still a vampire.

Ding! He named the girl, which implies some sort of parental involvement, but vampires are not generally fertile. There will be more in the next chapter.

Yeah, I wanted to make it clear that a) it wasn't a curse and b) that Buffy didn't automatically assume it was.

Thanks for the feedback!

03/02/2007 12:30 am
This is going to be like pulling teeth, isn't it? so much information very little time. He really did move on didn't he? Kinda makes me sick to my stomach though, that's why I don't read years later fics. Don't like to know there's been other people after. I'll always want for him to be happy but without to many details. Thanks for the update, this is going to be very interesting. Great work.
Thanks, Verda. To be coy, he said he had a daughter 'in a manner of speaking'. I'll be revealing more next chapter.

There will be references to past Spike relationships, but like the mentions of Katya earlier, they won't be detailed. I just don't think Spike is Spike without his libido or his capacity for affection. Hope you'll stay with me.

smlcspike
03/01/2007 11:16 pm
I hate stories with Spike and Buffy others but I understand, its hard to read and think that he got his soul for another slayer, but as you said in a reply he is not a monk.

Want to hear more about his matter of speaking daughter.

Buffy wants to know more too, so you'll find out next chapter. And the soul was for the baby, not for a slayer.

Thanks for reviewing!

03/01/2007 10:23 pm
better and better. thank you.

Thank you for reading.

03/01/2007 09:54 pm
Oh this just gets more interesting if possible. Naturally 30 years is bound to bring a boatload of story though. Hum....he called her Anne....got a feeling there's a BIG story here.

How sad that Buffy might just blame her comfort with Spike on that soul....grrrrrr.

Giggling over Willow's crusade, it fits!

Great update.

Kathleen

Thanks! Anne is conveniently both his own mother's name and one of Buffy's names. Buffy also wants to know the story, so I'll be revealing it in the next chapter.

And the soul as potential easy fix is going to come up as an issue.

Thanks for reading!

03/01/2007 06:58 pm
Just read through the first four chapters and I'm totally hooked! I do like future fics where Buffy comes back - especially when most of the gang is still around. I like the futures you've chosen for them - they seem to fit their characters in some unexpected ways.

This may sound weird from a Spuffy fan, but I really like that Spike didn't just pine away for her. He absolutely thrives on love and loving people, and I can't see him focusing his devotion solely on someone who's no longer around - even Buffy. I definitely believe that he'd have depths of love for others, without ever really letting go of Buffy, and probably never loving anyone as much as he loved her.

I like the way you bring out the details a little at a time, and even as one thing's being explained, it brings up whole new questions about something else. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this, and to finding out the answers to a lot of the questions you've (thus far) left unanswered.
Thanks so much.

The thing is... Spike has a libido. I mean, he was still sleeping with Harmony even after he decided he loved Buffy. And he and Buffy never got together. I don't think it makes sense that he's been a monk for thirty years. Or that he's never felt affection for another woman in that time.

I'm a Spuffy writer, and I'd guess it's clear that this will be a Spuffy story. But I also want to be true to the characters.

And there will be more answers to come :)

Pin
03/01/2007 06:57 pm
I love the backstory - this is really great. Thanks!

Thank you! More to come...

Tamara
03/01/2007 06:23 pm
Don't stop there! I want to hear more.

So does Buffy, so there will be much more next chapter :)

M.
03/01/2007 04:42 pm
Well this is it for me. You are a great writer but I'm a Spuffy fan till I die and I'm just not interested in reading about Spike having a serious relationship with anyone other than Buffy (regardless of when, how or who). I think I've overdosed on all the tremendous amount of angst in peoples' stories these days. I deal with enough of it in the real world. I read to escape reality, hence my love of sappy Spuffiness. I will look forward to your next fic.
I don't think it's realistic that Spike would not have had other women in his life thirty years on. On the other hand, I understand if it's not your thing. Sorry to see you go.

03/01/2007 04:32 pm
Spike had a daughter? Wait, I'm echoching Buffy!I must have gone insane. Must go check into an asylum.

:) More details on Spike's little girl to come.

Lou
03/01/2007 04:28 pm
Interesting development.

Thanks

Lenee'
03/01/2007 03:50 pm
Oh my god! This is such a great story! i'm really engrossed in it now. Beautiful writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!! LOL

Thank you! The next chapter is in the works.

dj
03/01/2007 03:18 pm
this is great, first i thought, spike fell in love again, but a daughter that is so much better!

Thanks. More details on the daughter to come next chapter.

-dicecanntcry
03/01/2007 02:59 pm
Still loving this story!

And as mean as it may sound, i'm glad the daughter isn't around anymore. Yeah, that sounds horrible, but in all these 'when Buffy came back' fics, when Spike has a kid it just seems to.. mess everything up. Almost like, he cheated on Buffy by having a kid, you know?

Oi. Anyway, hope to see more soon :)

Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter now. And indeed, I didn't want to make this a 'Buffy becomes a mom' fic. I may eventually write such a story, but this isn't it.