Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: A courteous yet harrowing grace

03/18/2007 02:16 am
I really liked the moment between faith and Dawn. Each of them were so guarded and not wanting to reveal their hurts, but they did to comfort one another, and that was beautiful. I think each of them needed to know someone cared about them just because it was them and not for familial or romantic reasons. Feeling concerned about the warning the women gave Buffy about those who would seek to split her family apart. It'd be nice if they got a few moments of peace and quiet without all the drama. Glad to know Spike and Sam are getting closer to finding Conner.

03/17/2007 06:23 am
What a beautiful way to end a chapter. Willow, defiant as ever, Spike and Lawson finishing their trials and Faith admission to having a heart that feels, was a wonderful experience. Looking forward to the last two chapters. Thank you for continuing to post this story here until it's finish. Wonderful story.

03/15/2007 02:51 pm
Now I'm wondering if a Key and a former Watcher would make good parents for a magical child (all that glowing green energy has to go somewhere). I am really enjoying this and will hate to see the end (except for the part where I can sit down and read it all in one fell swoop).

03/15/2007 07:21 am
Great update, loved the Faith/Dawn interaction. Where is Conner??!! lol, can't wait to see what other chalenges await Spike... hurry home Buffy and Spike so you two can be together!! :) lol j/k dont hurry, I like the way this is panning out, I'm very intrigued to find out more about Willow's punishment tho... in short: excellent work!! :D

03/15/2007 06:47 am
Great chapter.

03/15/2007 06:16 am
lovely read, thank you. the tender ending of the chapter was a fine read.

03/15/2007 06:14 am
well i'm glad that willow wont be doing any more damage for a while...can't wait for them to be reunited again... great chapter :)

Cat
03/15/2007 04:21 am
I have followed this story from the start. All that I can say is THANK YOU. Thanks for letting us read and enjoy your hard work.

03/15/2007 01:53 am
Well now I know where Annie got it from... And I just love how Buffy was given this blessing before she was sent back. Willow still never learned even after they gave their judgement. And GO Faith for being there for Dawn. She needed someone not 'close' to talk to and maybe Dawn and Faith can help each other.

pretty_in_fangs
03/15/2007 12:45 am
Beautiful, beautiful chapter.

03/15/2007 12:36 am
I think I get it,,, I dont want to say to much but I am pretty sure what that whole heart thing means... I will wait and see...

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! Oh and what does that mean “Though you are bonded to your William, your union is not yet sanctioned by the gods" Does that mean they are not married tradiionally? Or does that means maybe they will get even a stronger bond soon???

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Thank you!

Lou
03/15/2007 12:19 am
Just fabulous! You do great cryptic. The Dawn and Faith talk was sweet, snarky, and sad all at once. And dare I hope for a reunion in the not too distant future? Top chapter.

kim
03/15/2007 12:09 am
Loved the moment between Faith and Dawn.