Drenched by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 9: Confused By My Sins

09/09/2007 12:56 am
I really like the way you followed canon via Tales of the Slayers, an excellent series!
Thanks, Joyce! This was one of my favorite ToS stories and given Buffy's nightmare, it seemed like a better big bad than those three silly boys ...

04/01/2007 05:10 am
Ok so I'm worried about Jay and why he has that report. Not to mention all the slayer dreams Buffy is having and Britta working with the nerds to uncover treasures. I'm glad Buffy and Spike were able to talk and try and resolve some things. Now if they could only get a handle on how to fight all these enemies.

SpikesDeb
03/31/2007 05:54 pm
I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story, because I'm all humming from Spuffiness with a side of snark that's made me speechless. I am agog now, wanting more. I love it. You are an excellent writer with a great grasp of character voice - and I want more! Can you see the theme here? Great stuff, well done.

Caroline
03/30/2007 02:53 pm
I'm really enjoying the storyline. You do a wonderful job as describing tormented Buffy and Spike in season 6, and I do appreciate the differences you make from the show.
I'm very curious about that Britta Kessler.
And the sex scene was incredibly hot , as always.

simplefangirl
03/25/2007 03:57 am
Ahhh! Just who is this Jay guy, is he working with Britta? I'd be more concerned about him but I was distracted by the sex scene. Nice images there. Buffy really is a naughty little thing isn't she? Looking forward to the next chapter.
SFG, you're right to wonder about Jay - and his motives! And yup, that Buffy ... can't keep her away from Spike for more than a few scenes, but then, well, it is *Spike.* Thanks for the review!

Lou
03/24/2007 09:57 pm
Brilliant! That was a talk Buffy badly needed to have - she's so lost. Great devlopments too. The Council spies are gathering...
Thanks, Lou. And yeah, I think that Buffy needed to have a good cry. Now she just needs to remember who was there for her when she needed him most!

03/24/2007 08:15 am
Looks like Xander was right after all. I was hoping it was a setup, now the big question is, is this to help or harm? It's never been good for her once the Council showed up. No mention of William the Bloody and I find that most fascinating. Their libido is getting in the way of the really important things that they should be worrying about, not her darker kink! Great chapter, thanks.
Thanks, Verda. And hey, I think you've hit on the *real* reason Buffy and Spike never ended up together in S7 ... they'd be having so much sex they wouldn't bother to save the world, and they'd ignore the next apocalypse. Evil would reign supreme ...

03/24/2007 06:24 am
very good chapter, thank you. so, buffy's new boss is council? that should be fun.
Buffy's new boss is trouble, but let's not be too sure if he's Council or not just yet ... though the Council certainly is interested in events in Sunnydale!

03/24/2007 05:04 am
Hmmm...curiouser and curiouser. All kinds of delicious plot appears to be coming our way.

But we still get smut, right? Cuz, hey, you've got that shit DOWN! *giggles*

The opening scene between Buffy and Spike was more than I'd hoped for. They actually, like, discussed things. I'm definitely wishing canon had been more like this! Can't wait for more, dearie!
Well, why write if there isn't smut?! *Blushes, but thinks it is true anyway. Blushes more.*

Thanks for the review, and glad you like the plot. ;)

03/24/2007 04:56 am
Oooo even more intrigue! Glad this is going beyond the week long love fest. Your plot is really compelling. I am avid for more.

Kathleen
Glad you enjoyed - and *so* glad you're still reading & reviewing, Kathleen!

03/24/2007 02:15 am
well...that doesn't look good...i dont trust the council at all, and for them to be connected with her new boss is so not good...excellent chapter, love :)
The Council always spells trouble ... and yet, we haven't quite confirmed that Jay is there on their behalf ...