Future Sins Past by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Rude Awakening

04/24/2007 03:07 am
Whoa! Callous Angel - his cocky comments are very fitting! Loved Spike all bewildered, finding himself in a mystery room! Look forward to what happens next..
thanx, love, glad you enjoyed the chapter, love :)

03/31/2007 05:26 pm
I was reading the other comments, and someone mentioned that Angelus (here and in the canon) could have just killed Buffy right after he lost his soul. Obviously, he could have, but the quick kill has never been Angelus' style. Spike likes "fists and fangs" fighting. Get in, kill something, get out. Angelus likes to take things slowly, to torture, to torment. Look at Drusilla. He could have killed her quickly, but he killed her entire family first, played up her fear of being evil because she was psychic, drove her crazy, and THEN killed her. He considers Drusilla his masterpiece, and turns her so that he can admire his own work forever. Spike likes instant gratification. Angelus prefers to drag things out. So, I think you have Angelus acting completely true to character.
thanx so much, love, glad you like the way i've written him as he's one of the characters I'm least sure of ;)
*hugs*
DoS

03/31/2007 01:22 am
Maggie really was creepy with her ideas and beliefs. Not to mention the lengths she was willing to go to for "research". I'm thinking Spike is going to be in for a cruel shock when he realizes just how much danger he's in
you're right, love ... thanx so much for your kind review ;)

03/29/2007 07:41 am
Damn, and I was so hoping those chips wouldn't exist yet (pouts). Poor Spike- it just keeps getting worse. And Buffy, I wonder how she'll get tied in. Saving Spike somehow? Revenge, perhaps? It's all good :D
yeah, spike's in for trouble...and buffy's role i wont reveal just yet... :) thanx, love :)glad you enjoyed it :)

03/29/2007 03:27 am
both being shocked, repeatedly. good read, thank you.
thanx, love :)

03/28/2007 05:15 pm
The scene with Buffy and Angel was beautifully done.
Something I always wondered about the show, and now your version, though - why doesn't he kill her in this moment of confusion. If he'd just taken her in his arms, he could have drained her dry in a matter of moments. She'd be too surprised to fight at first, then probably too weakened.
thanx so much, so glad you liked it...and i always wondered that too, and actually thought about it in this, but thought that if they didn't bother to explain it in canon, i wasn't going to bother either :P lol thanx, love :)

03/28/2007 11:37 am
Eeek, whats going to happen? You must tell me!
you'll just have to wait with everyone else, love :P

03/28/2007 04:18 am
“Bye, Buff. I’ll call you!” The classic guy-just-slept-with-you-and-will-never- call-you-again line :P

When Angel told Buffy to just let the most important night of her life go, I was reminded of Spike's best night of his life holding Buffy and Buffy's subsequent, "Does it have to mean anything?" Up to this point, Angel and Buffy had shared all sorts of special moments, but sex was something new to share together. In the cannon, Buffy and Spike shared all sorts of sex together, but comforting each other was the new thing to share together. And they both had the most important night of their lives casually dismissed :P Looking forward to more angst.

Note: Angel's apartment did have a window. We see the sunlight shining through it in Season 1 when Angel finds Darla snooping in his apartment. She makes a comment about him living above ground like he's a human. I'm not sure if it was completely above ground or a basement apartment. Although, the writers did tend to change little details to suit their purposes, so the apartment could have been moved underground at some point :P

Okay, that had way too many :P 's.
yeah, i had not much actual remembrance of angel's apartment, so i was just guesing...oh well...and that's a brilliant point you brought out on the contrast between angelus' treatment of buffy and buffy's treatment of spike....excellent :) thanx so much for your kind words, love, i'll have more as soon as possible :)

03/28/2007 03:44 am
Good and creepy DOS.
thanx, love, glad you like it :)

03/28/2007 01:56 am
lol, *points to the review below* I agree! :) You just keep whipping up these fantastic fics (so quickly too!!) that I end up hopelessly addicted to by the end of the first sentence. :) excellent update... Spike n Buffy are in for one hell of a long day...
awww, thanx so much, i'm so glad you're into it already...more will be up as soon as i can manage it :)

Spuffy_killed_Bangel
03/28/2007 01:11 am
Awesome chapter DoS. I thought Blood Bound couldn't be topped and you come out with BHNM and when I thought that was good, you come out with a story that has my attention from the first line. You're awesome DoS.
awww, you're so kind, glad you're enjoying it so much :)

03/28/2007 12:16 am
Well that's new! Packing as he says goodbye? Poor Spike, has no idea what they've done to him. First his ho bag of a girl friend just leaves him in the dirt and then the soldiers defang him. All in all, a very bad day. How does the Buffy/Riley scenario work? Or doesn't it? Great job, DOS, it's really coming along.
yeah, a bad day for both of them...you'll have to wait and see if there's any connection in this fic between buffy and riley like there was in the show... :) thanx for your review, love :)

03/27/2007 11:53 pm
I love the parallels between Buffy and Spike, thrust into such different hells. I can't wait to see how they (eventually) find their way out again!
thanx, love, glad you like it so far...it's gonna be a long, difficult road for both of them :(

kim
03/27/2007 09:15 pm
Yeah, the movie's on DVD, but we only found it by buying it at the time. It's been a while, so they very likely could have changed. Hope you find it!
thanx, love :)

03/27/2007 08:21 pm
Oh oh bad things afoot for our pair....

I always felt so sorry for Buffy that morning after....UNTIL...she did much the same to Spike in Wrecked. She KNEW how much it hurt and pulled an Angelus anyway! However, I digress.

Maggie Walsh and her Initiative was always to worst of the Big Bad's in my opinion because, as humans, they should have been above the things they did....pulling wings off of flies, etc. It was humanity at the Nazi level (and didn't Joss imply that on AtS with having it be Nazi's that started it all to begin with?!?! ) Spike was in their grip back in WWII and later in Sunydale, how ironic.

Excellent update. I am soooo impressed that you are putting out several top drawer stories all at the same time. Really, I am in awe! Not a one is suffering for the other either (except poor Spike suffering in all of them *G*)

Kathleen
thanx so much, love, so glad you're enjoying it...i'm not so sure how this will go, three fics at once :P lol....
and i know, i always found that whole deal fascinating, the initiative/nazi apparent connection...
thanx so much for your kind words, more soon, love :)

03/27/2007 08:09 pm
I'm guessing Spike's been chipped, so if he try to attack one anyone, he'll be zapped.
Poor Buffy, waking up to Angel packing his things, and then he said all those mean words to her.
yeah, poor thing, it had to be crushing for her...and spike's not in for an easy ride,either :(

03/27/2007 08:02 pm
oh boy! Please dont make Spike stay there too long!

I am so excited to see where you take this story!

Great chapter!
thanx, love, glad you're liking it :)

kim
03/27/2007 07:52 pm
Angelus is funny!

Damn, Spike's already chipped. Looks like they're prepared to take notes and ask a lot of questions....

Ooo! Ooo! Have you seen "Demon Under Glass"? It's an independent film about a serial killer (vampire) who ends up taken in by a govt. scientific operation similar to how the Initiative could have started, and they do all kinds of tests, ask questions, research, etc. to prove if this serial killer is really something else, or just a pscho that drinks blood, and then learn all they can before eventually terminating the "project", since they can't just throw him in prison for the murders. The scientist ends up conflicted, though, because he gets to know the vampire (who's quite smart) and starts to feel bad about the experiments they subject him to. It becomes a question of who's the bigger monster......low budget, but a really good script.

Spike's wake-up just reminded me of it...
ooh, sounds really good...i think i'll see if it's on DVD and put it on my netflix list :) thanx so much for your kind review, glad you're still into the story, love :)