Future Sins Past by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Accidental Betrayals

04/24/2007 03:16 am
Angelus *grrr* tho I'm so intrigued, why did Buffy kiss him!? Ahh! Great chappie.
well, she really didn't have time to react...it all took place in an instant, she was confused, thought he was angel again...it was just one of those things that sort of happened, and she really couldn't help it :P thanx, love

Lou
04/10/2007 11:33 pm
Scariest Angel!! And the kiss business is such an interesting angle. Top chapter.
thanx, love, glad you liked it...i was hoping to make him pretty scary :)

04/05/2007 11:55 pm
great chapter, thank you. angelus at his best. poor willow, terrified by angelus and hurt by her friend's momentary reaction.
thanx, pet, glad you liked it :)

04/05/2007 01:10 pm
I can't believe Buffy let Angelus kiss her after what he was trying to do to Willow when she walked in the room. That is going to cause problems in their friendship. Not to mention that they really need to find the disinvite spell. I'm thinking that show Angelus is going to put on isn't one Spike needs to wake up to after his ordeal.
well, she really didn't "let" him, not for more than a second or two anyway....and she was more than a bit caught off guard...but basically angelus just played them against each other expertly...he didn't have time to kill willow, but he still managed to take the support of her best friend away from buffy :(

04/05/2007 06:10 am
Your Angelus sounds so much more like the "Big Bad" everyone made him out to be - which we never really saw on the show. I mean, telling Buffy she's bad in bed was mean, but his "tormenting" was kinda childish, with the fish and the drawings. I like to see some quality violence and perversion (and we all know you're our girl for that!) :)

The conflict between Willow and Buffy is wonderfully done, and so sad because this is when Buffy needs her best friend the most.

Great update! Can't wait for more!
thanx so much, love, i was hoping for that ... the fish thing never really seemed all that bad to me, either :P lol

04/05/2007 05:00 am
Oh, I didn't phrase my last comment properly. What I meant to convey was that I was angered by Willow's treatment of Buffy. Willow is often portrayed as the sweet, unconditionally loving best-friend, and I've just come to expect that from her. It's kudos to your writing skills that you can put a twist on the typical Willow and still make it believable. The reason I used the phrase "dirty little whore" was because my mom and I refer to each other like that when we're joking (...ours is a strange love). I'm just so used to it that I didn't think about how others would interpret it.

Anyway, I love your story!
lol...me and my sister do the same way, i just took your comment too literally :P thought you were referring to willow's responses to angelus...

anyways, thanx so much for your kind reviews, love :)

04/05/2007 04:42 am
"She was terrified and ashamed and confused -- and quite certain that she would never want a man to touch her again." As awful as the picture of Angelus straddling Willow and telling her that he's going to rape and kill her is, I just couldn't help but to laugh at the irony of that statement :P

"'No danger of any sunshine getting to him in here.'" Angelus always was a bit thick when it came to deciphering Drusilla's cryptic speak. If only he knew that he'd already let the sunshine in :P
lol...well, i did think of that as i was writing it, though not exactly in a humorous light :P
and yeah, angelus always took dru much too literally ... spike had much more experience dealing with her code :)
thanx for your kind review, love :)

04/05/2007 03:48 am
Oh wow... why do I suddenly crave an Angelus/Willow fic? Not kill her, though... not even rape- he's the one who told Spike that the best way to break Buffy was emotionally, and what better way to do that then seducing her friend, and then telling Buffy that Willow's better? Sorry- though it's your fault this plot bunny occured, lol.

Hope they get those disinvites in place PDQ...
lol...go write that fic, love, sounds good!!! :)

04/05/2007 01:08 am
I can't believe that she Angelus get that close to her. And go Willow for pointing that out to her. And what in the world is Spike goinog to do when he does finally wake up?
well, the whole thing happened rather quickly..buffy really didn't mean to let it happen...thanx, love, for the kind review :)

04/04/2007 07:26 pm
Oh wow.....GREAT Angelus! You have him nailed and then some. Dru is spot on as well.

Feel so sorry for Willow and Buffy both. This is going to scar them both so much more than the fish necklace of the canon. Willow will be less forgiving of Buffy this time too.

Poor Spike as well.....things are going to be really, really bad I think. His sunshine had best stumble on him but not until he's disgusted with his dark princess and her neanderthal daddy.

EXCELLENT.

Kathleen
thanx so much, so glad you liked angelus and dru, they're challenging for me :)
and yes, i thought that the fish necklace of canon was a bit weak for angelus, really :P i mean, he's this big bad legendary vampire, and he...kills her fish...
hmmmm....
anyways, yeah, things aren't going to be good for either of our two heroes for a bit, and i warn you all that things will be incredibly twisted and convoluted in parts of the plot of this tale...
but it should be a fun ride :)
thanx, love, for your kind words as always
*hugs*
DoS

PyroChilde
04/04/2007 04:58 pm
Ugh, stupid Angelus!! Great chapter, update soon!
lol...yeah, he'll get his in time :) thanx, love :)

Tristan_Charron
04/04/2007 03:39 pm
So loving this fic, Buffy's reaction to Angelus and the kiss was very heartbreaking....I feel terribly for her! Can't wait to find out what happens when Spike wakes up!
thanx, glad you saw it that way...buffy's reaction was really very natural, she couldn't exactly help it ... glad you liked the chapter :)

04/04/2007 02:30 pm
Wow...what an intense chapter. You portrayed Willow's reactions so brilliantly...and I was so afraid Buffy wouldn't get there in time to save her! Your Angelus is absolutely terrifying. Poor Spike...what's to come for him, now?
thanx, love, glad you liked my characterizations....more soon :)

pretty_in_fangs
04/04/2007 01:38 pm
::shudder::
sorry, love :(

Deb
04/04/2007 10:07 am
Excellent portrayal of Angelus. He's a mean one! It will be interesting to see how you bring Spike into the Buffy sphere of influence. Happy writing!
thanx, love, glad you enjoyed it :)

kim
04/04/2007 09:37 am
Whoa! I wasn't expecting that....but it really fits, too, since it's just a thing Angelus would do.
thanx, love, glad you liked it :)

04/04/2007 08:22 am
That was so hard for Willow knowing that her best friend wanted the man that was going to rape and murder her. Maybe if Angelus had raped her, Buffy won't have wanted his kiss, while her best friend laid there, beaten and bloodied. Guess Spike will heal a bit faster without a broken back. Won't have to listen to Dru and Angelus for as long this time. Hope you can update again soon, can't wait for Willow to tell Giles about Angelus and Buffy or at least not forgive her for a long time. Thanks, really coming along.
well, the thing is, to buffy's credit, it's been less than 24 hours since she slept with angel, and she's still totally in love with him (not angelus)...i can see how that moment could be terribly confusing to her, and everything happening so fast, she just sort of let it happen before she could think of *what* was happening, and by then he didn't let her stop it, you know?
thanx so much for your kind review, love :)
*hugs*
DoS

04/04/2007 08:09 am
uh oh. Trouble is abrewing.... glad Dru decided to at least TRY to show some compassion to the vamp who took care of her for the past century or so tho... *worried face* I'm not seeing any happy thoughts for Buffy or Spike in the near future... Great update tho!! :) looking forward to reading more!!
you're right, things aren't going to be too good for either of them for a bit... :( thanx, love :)

04/04/2007 07:24 am
I'm enjoying this story. And Willow's a dirty little whore! *is indignant*
what? i sooo didn't mean to give that impression... *sigh*
willow's not a whore, she's a virgin, and angelus was basically playing her own body against her...he wasn't physically hurting her, and his touch was physically stimulating to her, although psychologically devastating...IMO, it's just that sort of conflict that makes angelus's ways so frightening....
sorry if it came across differently than how i was intending...

04/04/2007 07:22 am
Ewwwww Angel touching *gags* Burn everywhere he touched!
lol..i don't think willow wants to burn herself...or buffy for that matter :P lol