Love's Bitch by Eowyn315
Chapter: Stupid Girls

Lou
04/08/2007 01:30 pm
High time Spike stopped being a doormat.
That's what being love's bitch is all about...

04/06/2007 10:00 pm
I know how much they love each other but maybe it's time for Spike to move on. At least start making new friends and do things away from the scoobies and Buffy. My heart just breaks for him. Not enjoying this part of the story but great work writing it, thanks.
I'll be introducing Clem eventually, but Spike's not big in the friends department. That's the thing about Spike... he doesn't really fit in with demons, or with humans, so it's hard for him to make friends. It's why he and Buffy are so perfect for each other - she doesn't really fit in, either.

04/05/2007 11:53 pm
Loving this story an amazingly large amount!! :P I thought I wouldn't be able to handle the Buffy/other, but it's soooo worth it, cause I love jealous Spike :D You've got all the characters voices and quips down pat, love it!! Great update, can't wait for more!! :)
Aww, thanks! That's just what I like to hear - some people get turned off by B/Other or S/Other, but it just causes great conflict. Glad you're enjoying it.

04/05/2007 10:30 pm
I love the way you portray Spike and Dawn's relationship. You capture her spazzy sweetness, and the way she sees Spike more clearly than anyone else bothers to. Your Tara, too, is lovely. I look forward to your next update!
Haha - "spazzy sweetness" - that describes Dawn so well! (Also, "teenage pain in the ass," but I try to play down that part.) And more Tara coming up too!

04/05/2007 09:25 pm
awww, i love spike and dawn's friendship, and buffy finally caught a clue, only after it was thrown at her head, though :P great chapter, love, looking forward to more :)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Mark Evans
04/05/2007 08:33 pm
Thank you for this wonderful chapter! The more I read this fic the more I love it. I even love Buffy dating Jacob, and that he's not a bad guy. Why? Because if Jacob's a decent guy, that means whenever Buffy eventually realizes she has feelings for Spike it won't be because she's running from another guy. It will be just because he's Spike. I also love the pace of this fic. On the show, things got out of hand really quickly btwn Buffy & Spike. On minute they were on the road to friendship, and the next minute it all went to hell. Your pace in getting them together means that when it does happen, it will really be special.
Aww, thanks for the sweet review! You're so right that Spike shouldn't be the rebound guy - she needs to love him for him. And I've always been a believer in the slow paced Spuffy - if she really *is* going to love him for himself, she needs time to get there.

04/05/2007 07:55 pm
Yay Tara to state what should have been obvious (but props to Buffy for realizing she is self involved to the tenth power).

Poor Spike and stupid Buffy. She has the perfect guy right there (And I don't mean Jacob who is likely to turn out to be some form of demon with human looks *G*)and just won't act on the obvious.

Sigh.....

Lovely update. Good progress is made and love the Dawn and Spike bonding.

Kathleen
Buffy just doesn't get how self-involved she really is. Not that this will be the beginning of Selfless Buffy or anything, but it doesn't hurt to clue her in once in a while.

Thanks for the review!

04/05/2007 07:10 pm
Great chapter. I'm so glad Buffy realised how tactless she had been when she was talking with Spike.
Thanks. Buffy's slow, but she catches on eventually. :)

04/05/2007 05:27 pm
Nice chapter - a little Buffy "duh!" moment (which, will hopefully turn into something more fruitful), some sympathy for Spike - well done.
Buffy really needed that "duh!" moment... But with her new avoidance tactic, not sure if she's really making progress.

Thanks for the review!

04/05/2007 04:47 pm
All I can say is 'poor Spike'. At least he has Dawn. And I really don't blame Dawn for wanting Spike to be the one in charged of keeping her safe. Buffy better figure out what she really wants with him.
With Spike and Dawn as close as they are, Spike may be working himself into their lives to the point that Buffy can't avoid dealing with it. Just hope she makes the right choice!

smlcspike
04/05/2007 01:44 pm
Oh I love it, I wonder if Buffy will finally realize she loves Spike.
She may need another anvil for that... lol. Thanks for the review!

04/05/2007 01:20 pm
I like the Dawn/Spike interaction--very big brother/little sister.
Thanks! I adore them, and they're fun to write.

jane
04/05/2007 08:19 am
Argh I just want Spike to go off and find another girl and shove her in Buffys face. Let her have boring Jacob and unsatisfying sex and let him deal with her moods.
Heh, might be satisfying, but it doesn't seem like Spike right now. He's not ready to let go just yet. But maybe if she keeps dating Jacob... who knows?

PyroChilde
04/05/2007 07:50 am
I love the Spike-Dawn interaction. It was severely missing in season six, I'm glad you aren't making the same mistake :)
Glad you like the Spike and Dawn. Their interactions in season 5 went a long way to making Dawn a likable character for me, and I missed it in later seasons. I definitely won't be neglecting them, as they're one of my favorite pairs to write for.

kim
04/05/2007 07:02 am
Ding ding ding....thank you, Tara! And yes, Dawn, Buffy is incredibly stupid. Poor Spike....
Thank goodness for Tara, eh? :)

Tamara
04/05/2007 06:25 am
Buffy finally bought a clue. Unfortunately she's still being a coward.
Well, can't have everything, can we? Buffy's got so many issues that it's gonna be a long process for her to really accept Spike.

Tristan Charron
04/05/2007 05:56 am
I just realized I never reviewed this wonderful fic and feel terribly! :) Great chapter, the Spike and Dawn scene was lovely and characterizations were spot-on. I feel so bad for Spike, though! His emotions are excellently written as well, and very heartbreaking. Can't wait for to see what happens next!
Don't feel bad! Thanks for the review, it's great to hear how much you enjoy the story.

LadyYashka
04/05/2007 05:47 am
I loved the Spike and Dawn scene. It was lovely. Poor Spike. Always in love with the stupid girls.

I'm also glad Buffy finally got a clue. It certianly took her long enough. Great update and I'm looking forward to the next.

Thanks, Lady! I love writing Spike and Dawn scenes. They have a fun rapport and such a unique relationship that provides unexpected depth. Glad you enjoyed it!

hellbound
04/05/2007 05:24 am
This is such a fun fic to read! The characterizations are perfect; Buffy's avoidance of the issue is perfect and the way she simply ignored the fact that Spike is in love with her is completely believable. It's an incredably engaging fic and I can hardly wait for the next update.
Thank you so much! Makes me happy to hear you're so into it.