Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Ten

Yay, kissing. :-)
06/08/2010 07:11 am
 

Cas
04/13/2007 03:16 am
And then she kissed him - and you left it there! Loved the idea of Xander with the flamethrower, and Buffy's comment about Giles. Loved the way you edited scenes, and just let us see enough to know what happened, w/o having to go thru the blow by blow.

Thanks! I feel like writing a complicated battle scene is not going to go well for me. Glad you liked what I did instead.

Lou
04/08/2007 02:08 pm
Maybe Buffy has realised what she so nearly lost.

Perhaps :)

04/07/2007 08:12 am
what i fun way to end the update. "And then she kissed him." very good read, thank you.


Thank *you*.

04/07/2007 07:22 am
Things are looking up for them. Poor Tasha, feeling like a voyeur when Spike and Buffy are together. Update when you can, that's all you can do. Really enjoying this, thanks.

Thank you. I've got the rest of the story outlined, so that should help with progress. When I can snag time to write...

04/06/2007 06:16 pm
Awwww - lovely little slide into something hopeful.

Thank you!

04/06/2007 04:38 pm
I like Tashi's alternate POV for a change and to get a picture of how people are responding to each other strictly from visual and verbal clues.

Thanks! I wanted to throw in a POV from someone who doesn't really know all the backstory on Buffy and Spike.

smlcspike
04/06/2007 01:32 pm
Oh I love the end.

Thanks :)

time of change
04/06/2007 01:20 pm
Great chapter!

Thanks!

jane
04/06/2007 12:05 pm
Great update looking forward to more.
Thank you!

04/06/2007 05:08 am
Always worth the wait. Nice picture of current slayer vs vamp situation. Good Xander interchange.

Kathleen

Thank you. I wanted to make it clear that Sunnydale is still pretty dangerous, and things might get even worse for a while.

04/06/2007 04:00 am
Have I mentioned yet how much I love your original characters? The insight into Tashi this chapter was great - especially the line "If she went down, would she rise again?"

I liked the aftermath of the fight - and woo! Spuffy kissage! Hope it's not too long before the next update.

Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter now, but no promises on when the next update will be.

I'm so glad you're liking the original characters. I want them to get filled in, but not take over the story.