Half and half by Eternal_red
Chapter: Chapter 6

01/14/2008 12:25 pm
oh, loved the "bitch" comment; that was great; one of my favorite scenes with Spike was that little countdown!! Awesome chapter; great story, really unique!
Out. For. A. Walk.... Bitch was one of my very favourite lines - just had to refer to it somehow - so glad you are enjoying this

04/10/2007 12:41 am
Just so giddy that I saw this chapter and I just LOVE IT. It was great that William calmed her down. And love that Spike was getting the Slayer cleaned up. And I am on their side mostly about Angel. Loved the look of the Slayer trying to get at William.
Letitia thank you and thanks also for your lovely reviews of my story on Spuffy Realm - even before I put some sensible punctuation in it!

04/09/2007 10:52 pm
I'm glad Buffy and William got to have a sweet moment together instead of going off on hormones. Liked the banter between her, Spike and William. Her suggestion to find Angel went over better than I thought it would, of course I'm thinking that might change if she gets in any danger
I don't think William and Spike need worry overmuch. Think Buffy and William deserve a few sweet moments - but maybe that's just my age!
Thanks Deb

04/09/2007 06:48 am
awww, liking this story lots...they're both so protective, of both buffies :) lol to her explanation of why they had to rescue angel...great chapter, love :)
Glad you like it DreamofSpike and I adore your fics so your reviews mean a lot

04/08/2007 09:35 pm
Glad to see this updated. I am really tickled with the Slayer....she's a hoot and Spike knows just how to handle her. Nice that she wants William and Spike both just as Buffy does. This little adventure will go a long way towards sorting out just who feels what for who.

Look forward to more.

Kathleen
I know that I should be plotting every inch of this carefully but it really is forming as I type (the folly of a first time writer I suspect). Hope my untangling of relationships works out in the end - thanks Kathleen

BT_
04/08/2007 07:13 pm
So many directions this could go! I'm enjoying the interplay amongst Spike/William/Buffy/Slayer. It's interesting that the Slayer is all "Grr-Ugh" and Spike is so articulate. Lead on - I'm happily following! :)
A new reviewer - thank you BT. The Slayer is sort of Beer Bad Buffy only with more beer and much more attitude. Still a brain in there though.

04/08/2007 07:37 am
wonderful read, luv. thank you. the last three paragraphs ending with "And I'll be helping him," are hysterical.
I'm glad my attempt at humour is working for you (giggles hysterically) thanks Vladt

04/07/2007 03:09 am
Leave it to Spike to think of putting her in his favorite colors, love it! Isn't William human too? Why would the slayer want to kill him ? And wouldn't he need to go to the bathroom as well for a change? Better and better, thanks sweetie.
You got the colour thing thank you. In my strange imagination William is in human form but is held together by mystical means - else he'd be a pretty unimpressive corpse after the split. So no bathroom breaks required!

Kate
04/07/2007 02:20 am
Hee! Love the little smack at the end...William does have a bit of Spike in him, doesn't he? *wg* Great story and awesome chapter!! Love how the two sides of Spike & Buffy connecting like-to-like yet each couple is learning from the other. I also like that Buffy is learning that she became such a great slayer because of who she is and not just because she's a slayer. Great revelation for her.
yes I liked the little smack bit too - now I have to decide whether to take that idea further later - i'm definately no Jolynn though!

thanks Kate