Dark Reflection by daniel_nieves
Chapter: Love and Jack Daniels

06/08/2007 02:37 am
Sniff, evil writer made reader cry in the first chapter. That was wicked.

Damonsailor
06/04/2007 03:30 am
hey nice chapter man. you really captured the characters. good jod!

rt
04/30/2007 08:41 am
saw this challenge awhile ago and couldn't wait to see what someone would come up with...a very promising beginning...i can't wait to see what spike wakes up to

04/26/2007 12:22 am
Welcome to BSV. Looking forward to your dark fic, just remember in the challenge it said no attempted rape, so you need to change your summary. This is a hard challenge, good luck, it's a good beginning

04/19/2007 07:35 pm
good to see dawn attempting to get through to spike. tough to do with the whiskey adding fuel to the turmoil. very good beginning, thanks for the read.

04/19/2007 04:03 pm
i love spike/dawn friendship, love that you had her stay around in this version and actually talk to him, instead of just accusing him and walking out like she did in the show... :P great chapter, love :)

04/19/2007 12:38 pm
Nothing like drunken, maudlin Spike.

04/19/2007 11:25 am
Great beginning, looking forward to more.