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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 13 Just Children
nmcil
09/11/2007 05:05 am
Hope that you can bring us some new chapters soon - I really am enjoying your work and this story very much - Very sad affair for both Buffy and Spike and their daughter -
Glad you like this one. Yes, it is next on my list to be updated! Trouble is, once I start, I have to go on with it because Shanny and the twins are incredibly sticky characters and won’t sit and play quietly until i am ready for them!
04/15/2007 04:21 am
excellent - Love the Spike-Angel fighting. Just like old times.
Some relationships never change, do they?
04/14/2007 02:58 pm
This is not going to go over well at all. There will be to much anger, hurt feelings and worry for them to have a rational conversation about things. I liked the peek inside Spike's head and just how much it meant to him to be able to have Shanny. He was clearly devastated that he isn't close to her and really wants to make up for things with his grandkids. You can still sense his fears about being second best when it comes to Angel too with regards to the women in his life. I wonder who was whispering in Billy's head, or who's whispering he was hearing in his own.
Thank you for your comments. Yes, obviously Spike and Angel have a history that goes back long before Buffy. But now they might just have to work together. And Shanny is going to be vitally important. If they annoy her - well.....
04/14/2007 04:32 am
The situation with the twins is intriguing, and scary. I'm glad Billy isn't picking up what the adults are saying, this would be a horrible way for them to find out David isn't really their father.
Gotta say I'm happy Shanny is on the scene. The interaction between Shanny and her parents should be interesting. Wonderful chapter! Congrats on your wins!!! :)
Gotta say I'm happy Shanny is on the scene. The interaction between Shanny and her parents should be interesting. Wonderful chapter! Congrats on your wins!!! :)
thank you for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated. Yes, the twins are discovering that magic is not all about having your own way. Shanny and her parents are going to have to work together. Oh, that’ll be fun!
04/13/2007 11:37 pm
if angel had half a mind, he would have known he would make things worse. spike wallowing in his insecurities and his daughter, who could or would not handle things, takes exception to their arguing. excellent read.
thank you. Poor Spike; would he ever be completely and utterly sure of Buffy even after twenty odd years?
04/13/2007 10:12 pm
Great update. And now things should get really tense! Talk about your dysfunctional familes! LOL
There was no way this family could ever be anything else! But don’t give up on them just yet. We’ve a way to go and blood is thicker than water - in many ways.
04/13/2007 10:05 pm
Even years later same ol roles... thats just sad... I feel for Buffy feeling like she has to put up wtih Angel the way she does... I feel sorry for Spike all his insecurities come back out again... Poor guy should feel secure by now and deserves it. Not an Angel fan... so better to say nothing at all.... I really hope the kids are alright but i am betting they are getting more information than they ever dreamed of getting... and good Shanny is here finally! Now if she will only keep her head ...
Can we rely on Shanny to keep her head? Hmm, her kids are missing and her parents are having an argument with the detective she hired who turns out to be her mother’s first lover! Yes, all the ingredients for a happy family scene!
Pam S
04/13/2007 09:38 pm
Glad Shanny showed up.. its time ..
Enjoyed the update.
Enjoyed the update.
thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. I Shanny is going to cause a lot of friction.
04/13/2007 09:18 pm
Wow! What an enterance. She realy is sPike's daughter, isn't she? Amazing fic.
glad you’re enjoying it. yes, there’s an old saying, Tigers breed true!
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