Drenched by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 11: Pour Your Misery Down

09/07/2007 02:34 am
I have completely lost track of this. Wow, what a chapter. All full of goodies and three more to get caught up with. It's a perfect time to grab Willow, when she's doped up on Rack's magic. Dawnis so busted, glad Spike was around to make sure nothing happened to the girls. They think it's all a game, they have no idea of all the rules. Great work, thanks.
Thanks, Verda! And yeah, Dawn is busted and lucky that Spike was around to save her.

golddrake
04/18/2007 12:29 am
great chapter

04/17/2007 10:01 pm
great update. many more questions. very good read, thank you.

04/17/2007 03:29 pm
Britta really is leaving the boys out to hang isn't she? I'm thinking that their trying to kidnap Willow might not be a good idea. Buffy certainly seems happy in denial land where even the whereabouts of her sister can't get passed her defenses. Thankfully Spike found her and Janice before anything bad could happen to them seeing as they were so drunk.

smlcspike
04/17/2007 01:59 pm
So Spike went to the Bronze after their little fight, Dawn is so busted, wonder what Buffy will say.

04/17/2007 04:54 am
“Does this mean anything to you?” She gestured at the rocks arranged in a semi-circle.

“Ampitheater for squirrels?”........................ "Name me another Main Street, USA where skink root and petrified hamsters are in heavy demand.”


I almost fell off my chair laughing at this exchange! Love the conversation completely.

WOW...lots to love in this update. Dawn and Janice being nailed by Spike, great Buffy and Spike relating, Buffy slowly realizing there IS something happening between them that is real, the reveal of the council connection.....the list goes on. Still and all I have to say that I am in love with Britta! Her snark outdoes even Spike at his best! Now, will it be Willow or Amy???? Hummmmm..

Great update.

Kathleen

Pam S
04/17/2007 03:21 am
Well, seems you PWP has taken on a little storyline. And hopefully Willow can take care of herself. Still trying to control her friends' lives.

Enjoyed.

04/17/2007 01:43 am
I really liked the way you pointed out the little ways Sunnydale residents are different from other people. It's not something I'd normally think of, but once you said it, I went, "Yeah... that totally makes sense..." I'm curious what Jay is up to, whether he has something to do with Britta or not.

And I snorted at "ampitheater for squirrels." :) Great update!

pretty_in_fangs
04/17/2007 12:51 am
::snicker:: I love seeing a woman put the smack-down on Warren. Even if I know it'll just make him that much worse to the next woman he thinks is weaker than him.

Oh, and I'm so sorry that RL's being a bitch. You know we love to see your updates whenever you can do them. Don't stress.

04/17/2007 12:11 am
wow...she's scary...and i really dont like warren, can he die soon?? and i loved the fight in the rain, beautifully done, awesome dialogue :) great update, love :)

04/16/2007 11:39 pm
nice.
enjoying the suspense.

Lou
04/16/2007 09:44 pm
Lots of skulduggery going on -- and Buffy seemingly on a downward path. Plenty of misery to come methinks! A great read.
Lou, you so get points for using "skulduggery" in a review! Glad you enjoyed.